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     I Came, I Tried, They Conquered
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    Thanks for commenting on "Cat Hat".
    Yeah, It was a rhyme my friend taught me, and it makes me laugh a lot.

    Wishing for more
    ~Brian
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 11:46:49 | by Imadjinn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comments. They are greatly appreciated. =]

    ~Steph
    | Posted on 2007-07-17 14:17:07 | by xXCptn_SephyXx - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for commenting on "Return of the Ex". I agree he doesn't deserve me, but my loins beckon his arrival nevertheless. He's just a MSN Messenger tease now though, telling me how much he'd love to do me ... but he can't 'cause he's not single anymore. His definitely thrives on the attention.
    | Posted on 2007-07-16 23:08:01 | by ssssss - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on 'i am from barbed wire.' You're right that it needs more images. That was the first stanza of the analytical poem--it's supposed to be an essay in poem format. My school invented it, I believe, or stole it and took credit.

    melora
    | Posted on 2007-03-24 10:14:44 | by Melora - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on "The Depressed Slave and a Temptress".
    Yeah, I figured I'd use a lot of personification since the whole suicide thing is played out so it would be as unique as possible. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you read more of my poems in the future.
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 12:49:10 | by Draigon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I myself often do not have a clear feeling, and thus it is hard for me to write something that does. Also, I do not write in specifics very well, when I do so I find that I just isolate interpretations, so that as well will be tricky for me to improve. As far as the line that made you laugh, it's alright, I don't mind :-p. However, it does say "i'm" previously, and it was meant to be based as if "i", or the person relating to it was saying it as such. I don't know what i'm saying, or who is even saying it.

    You know that feeling? I hope it makes a little more sense atleast in that line.

    And nah, I don't mind the harsh cricism, but like I said, I have trouble making changes based on what you said, as if the piece all of a sudden became a story of specifics, it would ruin alot of it. However, I do see what you're saying, so if you can help me out maybe by being a bit more specific or something, I could improve the write based on that. Thanks for the help though, I'll get on that typo, and see if i can clarify anything without feeling like I messed up my image of it :-p.
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 23:10:54 | by Ygi - [ Reply to This ] -



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