thanks for the comment on "random rants" and for picking out my typo. yeah I better go fix that soon. Anyways, I read it over, after you said it seemed like a abandoned hospital and I was like wow it really does. So thanks for your new perspective, it makes the poem come more to life. :)
Thank you Angel
for your kind thoughts on my "wilderness"
I hoped to capture the desperation that is the city - my city, your city, any of today's cities. Or, as you say, a neighborhood - perhaps all of the city is not quite so awful as I picture - where I live ain't too bad but parts are god-awful.