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     Featured workEyes To Embrace
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     My Maya
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     A Challenge to face
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     fight did the legend
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     The island
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     Clouds of emotions
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     Hate
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     the endless smile
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     Hole in the heart
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     Purpose redefined
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    Thanks bunches on the commentary for Chaios...and it did say what i seen...a wolf...reread it you'll see the words. Again thanks.
    Beautiful,yet Corrupted
    Dominique aka:Rosa blu
    | Posted on 2008-09-23 00:33:19 | by DearlyDeparted - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Danke...Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate your honesty. As for the first lines in the poem I was aiming for a structured beginning which would then seem to fade. The forced rhyme represents submission to a structure.

    Colten
    | Posted on 2008-09-08 21:20:24 | by Colten - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i agree that it is simple(the most simple) ryming, but that was the point of the poem, it is sapose to be simple! and i like the name gorarath....but i will take what you said to heart
    | Posted on 2008-09-04 16:02:01 | by Mr.Ordinary - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    it was supposed to be childish its about a cat!
    a silly little Cat


    -Bella
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 14:53:22 | by IsabellaAurora - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    sure whatever,

    don't call me Izzy

    -Bella
    | Posted on 2008-05-10 09:46:58 | by IsabellaAurora - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    obviously you have not read any of my other works
    and no i am not seven years old and you can slap yourself for being such an [censored].
    i wrote that the way the teacher told me to, it was by a very SIMPLE structure

    and i dont exaclty see blood pouring from your hand onto paper

    i dont mind critism, but you dont have to be a jerk to tell people what you think

    - Bella
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 14:50:04 | by IsabellaAurora - [ Reply to This ] -



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