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Thanks bunches on the commentary for Chaios...and it did say what i seen...a wolf...reread it you'll see the words. Again thanks.
Beautiful,yet Corrupted
Dominique aka:Rosa blu
Danke...Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate your honesty. As for the first lines in the poem I was aiming for a structured beginning which would then seem to fade. The forced rhyme represents submission to a structure.
i agree that it is simple(the most simple) ryming, but that was the point of the poem, it is sapose to be simple! and i like the name gorarath....but i will take what you said to heart
obviously you have not read any of my other works
and no i am not seven years old and you can slap yourself for being such an [censored].
i wrote that the way the teacher told me to, it was by a very SIMPLE structure
and i dont exaclty see blood pouring from your hand onto paper
i dont mind critism, but you dont have to be a jerk to tell people what you think
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