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    Journal: Inspired
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    Mood: Sigh...
      
    The alpha phi alpha crosses tonight. I don't know how i feel about that, at one point and time i wanted to pledge. Now i could really give a fuck about the whole affair. But i know people on line so i guess i should go and support.

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    ...Created 2010-11-19 17:18:45     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Thank you for reading, and for your input.

    I've been active here for a while too, under different pseudonyms as well... refer to http://www.eliteskills.com/u/alteredlife for my original and a list of my ID's after that lol.

    I guess... after a few thousand critiques given and received you get a bit blase, jaded, don't give a flying crap about it all any more.
    | Posted on 2010-11-22 04:20:23 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It's not a combination of works, it's a rewritten poem of a work I wrote about 4 years or so ago. When I said "read them both and compare" I meant to read the new piece and the old one to make up your own mind. Some of the phrases I kept because I liked them but most of it was pretty much overwritten and reworded for a more poetic flow. I've even edited it as much as today. The original is called "???" if you'd like to look through my works; it's there.
    | Posted on 2010-11-19 19:03:35 | by Dolor - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the com. on Banner . Glad you liked it . It's kind of simple but I like it too .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2010-11-19 18:31:13 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    tyty for the comment,
    | Posted on 2010-11-14 20:22:27 | by Alilia - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks 4 the comment man, i found it very inciteful and interesting.youre right about everything you said, i didnt really put much thought in2 ten thousand tears, just wrote what i felt.im thinking alot about what you said quite a bit though.thank you.

    -Thor
    | Posted on 2010-11-12 15:47:23 | by Midnight_Toker - [ Reply to This ] -



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