--Elite Writer Alias: keyverse Name: Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 3417 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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The alpha phi alpha crosses tonight. I don't know how i feel about that, at one point and time i wanted to pledge. Now i could really give a fuck about the whole affair. But i know people on line so i guess i should go and support.
I've been active here for a while too, under different pseudonyms as well... refer to http://www.eliteskills.com/u/alteredlife for my original and a list of my ID's after that lol.
I guess... after a few thousand critiques given and received you get a bit blase, jaded, don't give a flying crap about it all any more.
It's not a combination of works, it's a rewritten poem of a work I wrote about 4 years or so ago. When I said "read them both and compare" I meant to read the new piece and the old one to make up your own mind. Some of the phrases I kept because I liked them but most of it was pretty much overwritten and reworded for a more poetic flow. I've even edited it as much as today. The original is called "???" if you'd like to look through my works; it's there.
thanks 4 the comment man, i found it very inciteful and interesting.youre right about everything you said, i didnt really put much thought in2 ten thousand tears, just wrote what i felt.im thinking alot about what you said quite a bit though.thank you.
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