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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: kiddo13
    Name: Crystal Lynn
    ASL: 28/F/TN
    Website:[ Website ]
    Days Away: 3744
    Life Story: unfinished
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    11.23 Years 1.12 Decades
    136.6 Months 585.43 Weeks
    4.098000e+8 Heart Beats
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    To err is human, but when the eraser runs out before the pencil, you're overdoing it. -John Jenkins

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    Things are going good, right? Great, healthy kids. Wonderful, loving man. A job I love. Friends and family I can count on. Life is so good and I am so stinkin' bored!!! Ugh!


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    perhaps you shall never return and I slashed and burned blasphme in the hope a tree might bear forbidden fruit, Thank you for being resolute with your words and furtive glances emancipating words from their captions.peace
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 07:44:59 | by shaman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the recent comments on my work. If you understood any of it, you're light years ahead of a lot of people on this site. I hope I didn't sound too harsh, but your unstructured writes show a great deal of potential and reveal your soul.

    Take care.
    Bill.
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for reading awaken she is actually a collection of many that have shared my heart some friend others lovers essentially a just made up a character based on life experience. I wrote it for clay becuase she loved my mushy love or longing posts. This piece is good, but I still think baking soda is stronger none the less each write has it's place that is why so many write in need of attention liter my page nad other some people have an affinity for so I haven't the heart to delete them. i'll get back around here eventually there's two feet of snow outsie so I'm not driving anywhere if I can help it.
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by shaman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi!

    Thanx for the comment on The little fairy.
    I am glad you liked it :)

    Hugs!
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ChrystalR - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi again,

    Thanks for the comment on 'All I've Learnt'. Glad you liked it. Adding contractions and removing them has been a huge part of editing this piece. One guys entire comment revolved around apostrophe 's' and the lack of them. Lol. I'm grateful for your views. I'll take your advice and leave it as 'is'.

    As for stanza four, I'm surprised you it wasn't clear. Maybe the repeated reference to seeing and sight. I like to play with words sometimes. It simply means that: I now know that blind people can actually see (in the mind/heart sense) just as clear and just as far as normal people (see in the normal sense), if not clearer and further - because normal people take for granted their sight and that has led to them to being blind to what their minds and hearts see.

    Does that make better sense? Sorry if it was ambiguous. And I'll have to apologise for having to prove you wrong as I did the person who commented on the same thing, but 'learnt' is a word. It's probably not frequented in America (which is where the rest of the world seems to get their English) but it definitely does exist. I assure you. Thanks anyway.

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you so much Crystal. I am so glad it touched you like that. I wrote this because of a tv show I watched on starving children in Angolia. It broke my heart so bad for them, I had to do something..not just sit by and FEEL for them! I see that you have the same heart!!! GBY:)
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by MMISS - [ Reply to This ] -



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