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    Name: Crystal Lynn
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    Mood: Bored
      
    Things are going good, right? Great, healthy kids. Wonderful, loving man. A job I love. Friends and family I can count on. Life is so good and I am so stinkin' bored!!! Ugh!


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    Hello Crystal,

    How are you? Thanks for the comment you left on 'Drunken Dialogue'. Your interpretation is pretty much accurate. I'm glad you liked it, your compliments flatter me. If you do find a title, give me a message; somehow 'A Drunken Dialogue' seems pretty lame a title, even to someone who lacks any kind of taste (at least where clothes are concerned).

    As for your sappy happy mood, great for you. Enjoy it while you can, for soon you're realise that other people rarely let anyone adore you in peace. Never mind me, it's a horrible situation I'm going through at the moment.

    Take care,

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thanx alot for all the love on my page it means alot, I like the feeling of knowing someone checkeed out your page too :)

    much LOVE
    James
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by James Reyna - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey! Thanks for the comment to My Crucifixion....

    The thing with that post...is it is a spoken word piece. More of a slam piece verses actual written poetry. I have an Evoca of it being spoken but they don't allow you to add those to this site.

    When you hear it spoken it all goes together much smoother...the words and the count. I understand what you are saying on it. Just wish I could post Evoca.

    Thanks!!
    | Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for reading blaspe-me. Part of the problem you'd having understanding some of this piece would probably i'm not
    christian. So certain things in it are from other religions. It is a bit commercial that's true I was thinking that by playing on common cultural refferences People would be able to relate more and realize God is all around them, but if that doesn't work I'll consider that in my revisions. Peed on the seat line I was planning on omitting. This form of perfection never needed our erections is mainly a ploay on the fact that the original church was more about people and now it's becoming about buildings. i considered using where the hell are all the people but I chose not to because I don't believe in hell in the biblical sense. I've written and rewritten much of this and if I didn't like certain parts I'd scrap the whole thing almost three years in the making and no where near finished. Thanks for the helpful adice I'm glad you enjoyed some of it. I read something of yours tommorow I'm going to bed cause i have to go back to work tonight and I've been sleeping on a first shift schedule. thanks. peace
    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by shaman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Haha Thanks for the comment I'm glad you liked the guy who enjoyed wearing yellow.
    I'm not sure what the point of it was, but if it makes people laugh, then it's good enough for me

    I hope all is well on your side of the screen.

    Thanks again

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Just wanted to thank you for your comments on Gidgy-Gadgits and I am glad you enjoyed the read. It is nice to have someone read my poems for a change.

    !doc'
    | Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger - [ Reply to This ] -



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