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    Journal: Dear People,
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    Mood: Smokingpoetry
      
    I'm sorry I can not help you with your writing. I don't know anything about anything, so I'm not really comfortable making suggestions about your stuff.

    Hoping for your kind consideration,
    Lacky.


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    | Posted on 2010-11-04 19:19:29 | by solararia - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on my piece.
    | Posted on 2009-05-30 15:12:30 | by wizardmaster - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    maybe I over-simplified but yknow, talking about you own poem is always like that lol
    | Posted on 2009-05-15 09:42:14 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Uh...the Adam one is very obscure but its kind of more the earth giving birth to a man. Im not gonna try explain it cos you can take whatever yknow? I guess it could be the earth giving birth to itself in a way.

    Heart is much more simple, if you ever wanna read it again just do it from this perspective:

    If I were to call the poem shop it would be something like:

    Shop

    There are people walking through me every day
    I look at them through sliding doors,
    they pack me full of food etc etc

    yknow? Heart is kinda the same idea.

    Thank you so much for the comments, Im glad someone took an interest.

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2009-05-15 07:35:29 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    lol, no prob sis. I get excited when I read good ish, lol. But anyway, you should really try spoken word. I'm a complete wuss, but I have confidence in my poetry and that its worth hearing so...I spit. Trust, your stuff is worth hearing. But I understand that there may not be any venues around your way.

    As for my poem "THE SALUTE". It's not finished as you guessed, still gotta wrap my head around the thoughts. But I'm glad you enjoyed reading it...I guess lol.

    SPIT FROM YOUR SPINE
    red
    | Posted on 2009-05-14 07:34:09 | by red_summer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks a lot for your comment and yep you were right you got it in one haha!

    Phil
    | Posted on 2009-05-14 07:24:08 | by Dead Bell - [ Reply to This ] -



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