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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Sometimes I feel like banging on the window, bang until someone listens, until someone looks my way.

    I feel like I'm living and writing in this fishbowl, just hoping someone will glance this way.

    But I'm afraid of pushing through...
    what if it's not solid glass?
    what if it's dense but pleasurable goo
    and I'll just slip through?

    what if I become visible?
    a spotlight shining bright on my forehead...
    a sudden target?

    There's that thrill and the fear... and... and that gripping feeling clutching my heart.

    All these what if's...
    All this stationary action,
    All this doing nothing for the sake of not moving,
    All this feeling in silence...

    What happened to all the guts?
    what happened to rushing into that force of nature,
    to being consumed by the dark, stormy and electric night?

    what happened to all those guts...



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    Thanks so much for your comment on Empty Apartment! I'm glad you took the time to read it! :) Ill be sure to return the favor!
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    | Posted on 2013-11-04 11:37:45 | by Custodiogabs - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for your kind comment of "rise" I'm glad you caught the jest of it being of the escape from the allegorical cave and into the light where we belong. the light from the fire that comes from the cave is so deceiving that we think it's all there is to be. but there is a much brighter light to experience once we've crawled out and embrace the true radiant light given to us for the taking.
    take care,
    sarah
    | Posted on 2013-03-10 09:04:55 | by vohomegirl - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks, this means a lot, i kinda got the feeling that i am a little alone with that attitude.
    hope you're ok, glad to see you're still around, too.
    | Posted on 2013-01-13 17:10:00 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Of course you're the wizard.
    | Posted on 2012-12-14 12:59:59 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey lady ! It's nice to come back here & see a familiar...name ;P Thank you for your awesome comment on Hour Of The Goddess ! I read your journal & am hoping you're doing well. All my eliteskills friends have a special place in my heart. If you're interested I'm on a new poetry site now--deepundergroundpoetry.com scam---it's cool but the comments & critiques are lacking compared to what you get here.
    Spankings-
    Mistress CC ;P
    | Posted on 2012-12-12 17:54:27 | by C. Starr - [ Reply to This ] -



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