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    Journal: Fizzy drink
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I'm feel shaken, ripe, ready
    like a fizzy drink on the brink of release.

    I keep looking back on the zeroes and ones that make up my thoughts and I wonder when the action will begin.

    I've been stuck in this intermission,
    the longest pause,

    I'm the audience and the play,
    I grow restless with anticipation.
    I am weary of this delay.

    I was promised a good play,
    the reviews still buzzing in my mind,
    but it falters

    The delay and the uncertainty.
    I sit in this dark room awaiting instruction
    should I clap? should I shout? should I demand a response?

    "You disappoint me" I smirk in disgust
    I brush her up and down with a cold..slow..drawn out glance

    "I thought you were better than this, with more potential" my disgust is starting to show

    You're a wasted fizzy drink, falling flat upon release

    what happened to the excitement, the buildup, the energy leading to the burst?





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    Thanks so much for your comment on Empty Apartment! I'm glad you took the time to read it! :) Ill be sure to return the favor!
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    | Posted on 2013-11-04 11:37:45 | by Custodiogabs - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for your kind comment of "rise" I'm glad you caught the jest of it being of the escape from the allegorical cave and into the light where we belong. the light from the fire that comes from the cave is so deceiving that we think it's all there is to be. but there is a much brighter light to experience once we've crawled out and embrace the true radiant light given to us for the taking.
    take care,
    sarah
    | Posted on 2013-03-10 09:04:55 | by vohomegirl - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks, this means a lot, i kinda got the feeling that i am a little alone with that attitude.
    hope you're ok, glad to see you're still around, too.
    | Posted on 2013-01-13 17:10:00 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Of course you're the wizard.
    | Posted on 2012-12-14 12:59:59 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey lady ! It's nice to come back here & see a familiar...name ;P Thank you for your awesome comment on Hour Of The Goddess ! I read your journal & am hoping you're doing well. All my eliteskills friends have a special place in my heart. If you're interested I'm on a new poetry site now--deepundergroundpoetry.com scam---it's cool but the comments & critiques are lacking compared to what you get here.
    Spankings-
    Mistress CC ;P
    | Posted on 2012-12-12 17:54:27 | by C. Starr - [ Reply to This ] -



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