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    Journal: My love letter
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I realized today I have to let you go. It's a slow kind of ache, the kind the body numbs in order to go through with your words.

    I've been grasping at the essence of you, looking to connect, gravitating towards you and your shiny new gem and as you oscillate slowly I catch a glimpse of rays, some light into my dark patch of earth.

    The nourishment I once provided is no longer needed, your strength is vast and blinding.

    It's OK.

    I kind of want to fade away, maybe they'll be growth for me as well, other kindred spirits that will elevate. There is loss and hope and deep regret. But in life there are no certainties, no constants, ever changing is the world and so must we.

    I am a your soft reminder, a one dimensional safety net and... I excelled at it like a
    good solider?
    a blind lover?
    a lonely shape?

    I proud blanket relished in my purpose, but now it's hard not to be direct. There isn't time to hide but was I ever one to hold back?

    I love as fiercely as I hate but the gods had the last laugh in the end. Out of pride and fierceness I was molded and shaped, you blew your desires into me and my heart was caged. I am your creation, of fear and manic love I was birthed. I have no sense of self.

    I close my eyes and wish for strong winds,
    a gust or gale.
    I close my eyes and stand witness to change in the air
    a lighting bolt?
    please something to signal the end.
    I want to honor the passing,
    revere in the growth and change.
    "You are beautiful" were the last words I said as the winds pick up and specks of my essence ride the wind away.


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    Thanks so much for your comment on Empty Apartment! I'm glad you took the time to read it! :) Ill be sure to return the favor!
    | Posted on 2013-11-06 20:42:12 | by SweetAndOhSoME - [ Reply to This ] -
      
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    | Posted on 2013-11-04 11:37:45 | by Custodiogabs - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for your kind comment of "rise" I'm glad you caught the jest of it being of the escape from the allegorical cave and into the light where we belong. the light from the fire that comes from the cave is so deceiving that we think it's all there is to be. but there is a much brighter light to experience once we've crawled out and embrace the true radiant light given to us for the taking.
    take care,
    sarah
    | Posted on 2013-03-10 09:04:55 | by vohomegirl - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks, this means a lot, i kinda got the feeling that i am a little alone with that attitude.
    hope you're ok, glad to see you're still around, too.
    | Posted on 2013-01-13 17:10:00 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Of course you're the wizard.
    | Posted on 2012-12-14 12:59:59 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey lady ! It's nice to come back here & see a familiar...name ;P Thank you for your awesome comment on Hour Of The Goddess ! I read your journal & am hoping you're doing well. All my eliteskills friends have a special place in my heart. If you're interested I'm on a new poetry site now--deepundergroundpoetry.com scam---it's cool but the comments & critiques are lacking compared to what you get here.
    Spankings-
    Mistress CC ;P
    | Posted on 2012-12-12 17:54:27 | by C. Starr - [ Reply to This ] -



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