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    Journal: Fizzy drink
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I'm feel shaken, ripe, ready
    like a fizzy drink on the brink of release.

    I keep looking back on the zeroes and ones that make up my thoughts and I wonder when the action will begin.

    I've been stuck in this intermission,
    the longest pause,

    I'm the audience and the play,
    I grow restless with anticipation.
    I am weary of this delay.

    I was promised a good play,
    the reviews still buzzing in my mind,
    but it falters

    The delay and the uncertainty.
    I sit in this dark room awaiting instruction
    should I clap? should I shout? should I demand a response?

    "You disappoint me" I smirk in disgust
    I brush her up and down with a cold..slow..drawn out glance

    "I thought you were better than this, with more potential" my disgust is starting to show

    You're a wasted fizzy drink, falling flat upon release

    what happened to the excitement, the buildup, the energy leading to the burst?





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    what i meant to say.
    solid commenting there. enjoyed that a lot. didn't think you were still around.
    | Posted on 2012-12-11 19:29:36 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ah madame
    | Posted on 2012-12-11 19:17:52 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks a lot for you comment on "The New Blind Kind" I enjoyed reading it and it's just what I wanted you know some help :)


    Kind regards,

    Ethan Brody
    | Posted on 2012-12-11 07:53:59 | by Ethan Brody - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for both the comment and the favorite
    | Posted on 2012-11-09 18:14:46 | by TangledInDreams - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Interesting....what will leave you? That expression that you choose to subdue?
    | Posted on 2012-07-07 19:04:26 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Andrea--

    thanks so much for your reaction to "uh huh"

    and i think readers own the poems once we, the writers, let them go.

    but actually your philosophy of the poem is pretty close to exactly what i was thinking as i wrote it.

    i was born in 1950...a simpler time...i saw technology start to move in..and rued it even then...

    thanks again for stopping by my little poem...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-26 13:29:20 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -



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