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    Name: Andrea V.
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Sometimes I feel like banging on the window, bang until someone listens, until someone looks my way.

    I feel like I'm living and writing in this fishbowl, just hoping someone will glance this way.

    But I'm afraid of pushing through...
    what if it's not solid glass?
    what if it's dense but pleasurable goo
    and I'll just slip through?

    what if I become visible?
    a spotlight shining bright on my forehead...
    a sudden target?

    There's that thrill and the fear... and... and that gripping feeling clutching my heart.

    All these what if's...
    All this stationary action,
    All this doing nothing for the sake of not moving,
    All this feeling in silence...

    What happened to all the guts?
    what happened to rushing into that force of nature,
    to being consumed by the dark, stormy and electric night?

    what happened to all those guts...



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    what i meant to say.
    solid commenting there. enjoyed that a lot. didn't think you were still around.
    | Posted on 2012-12-11 19:29:36 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ah madame
    | Posted on 2012-12-11 19:17:52 | by Jimi James - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks a lot for you comment on "The New Blind Kind" I enjoyed reading it and it's just what I wanted you know some help :)


    Kind regards,

    Ethan Brody
    | Posted on 2012-12-11 07:53:59 | by Ethan Brody - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for both the comment and the favorite
    | Posted on 2012-11-09 18:14:46 | by TangledInDreams - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Interesting....what will leave you? That expression that you choose to subdue?
    | Posted on 2012-07-07 19:04:26 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Andrea--

    thanks so much for your reaction to "uh huh"

    and i think readers own the poems once we, the writers, let them go.

    but actually your philosophy of the poem is pretty close to exactly what i was thinking as i wrote it.

    i was born in 1950...a simpler time...i saw technology start to move in..and rued it even then...

    thanks again for stopping by my little poem...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-26 13:29:20 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -



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