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    Journal: hmmm
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    Mood: procrastinating and silly
      
    I'm no good with titles. I guess that is pretty obvious. I'm stalling, I should be packing. Or more precisely, I should be matching socks, so I have some to pack. Every other article of clothing, for all six of us, is packed. It is just the unscalable mountain of socks beckoning to me from the daybed across the room. It is taunting me, the evil thing. It is an abomination of conciousness - socks have no right to speak to me like this... I think perhaps they frighten me a little, for they are so numerous and I am but one.


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    thanks for your comment on ultamatum. what i meant was the freedom to be myself, and not have to keep pretending that nothing bothers me. the problem is that he is always playing this game online, and i wouldnt mind, except that it meant he stopped having time for me, and the time he did spend with me he complained about. things seem to be getting better though. thanks for your concern.
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by eowyn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi there, Laura. Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you. Thanks for the comments you left on 'Skeleton Key'. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I liked your interpretation, by the way. It's easy to see the images you got from the poem. The origin of the piece is a bit more mundane, though. I wrote it about a little girl with mental paralysis I saw in a group home. I was thinking about how hard it must be on her parents. Life is rough. Again, thanks for the comment.

    Hi ho,
    -DD
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by DevilDinosaur - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanx for your comments on *Dream Stream*
    It was and is a good memory of my youth.
    Just writen alittle diffrent. Trurth be told I poored the soda in her popcorn after she made go and get it, after the movie had started. I know, I was young & d-u-m-d dumb. But still a good memory
    thanx again for the read.
    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Bobby K - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey thanks for commenting on "Jack-in-the-box" I was worried the straight transition from character to character would lose a bit, but I'm glad it could still be followed ok. I capitalized He, Him, You, etc, when talking about Jack, to sort of hint more at his religious sybolism. Usually Him is only capitalized when refering to God, and in this story he was as much god as Jesus.
    Again, your feedback is much appreciated :)
    | Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by deadsqrl - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    glad to be of assistance. Hey, say hello to jack for me. And now you better scribble out a kiki-centered magical story, don't want the sibling rivalry to gear up!
    see you around
    alanna
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    Hola darling! Thanks for faving me! I greatly appreciate it.
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