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I revised and updated a new poem. Please let me know what you think, before I publish it?
Joy comes in the mourning, when you color me true You color me well, when you color me blue Crimson red sunset reflects in indigo eyes Orange blossoms planted in soft maple hair Lavender sky dancing on sugar plum clouds Olive green corn stalks resting on a Kansas farm Curious black crows wake a wan scarecrow Ruby red slippers click drag me kicking home If you color me bright, then you color me bold Paint me some new colors, love, just green and gold
The poem titled, "Waters Edge" is a magical and surreal type poem. The idea came from tragic deaths between Romeo and Juliet. This poem developed legs, arms and feet which stands on its own. The poem has a personality that I cannot control. Again, this poem is symbolic liturature and I do not advocate anyone committing suicide.