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Name: Mel Doe
ASL: 38/f/uk
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16.94 Years 1.69 Quote:
They may not remember exactly what you said, but they will remember exactly how it made them feel.


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Waters Edge by FireFly747
My sould is my own! (revised) by Poetic
"To understand" by Akai_Ame
Daddy's Burning Out by LossOfHope03
Sharing Silence by MmR
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Please look at my short poem titled, "Waters Edge" I think you will enjoy reading this one.
It is only symbolic, and I do not advocate or suggest suicide. I got this idea from the play, "Romeo & Juliet" Please respond.
| Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Also, please check and comment the following new poem titled, "Cold and Wet"
| Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
I really appreciate the clarification on your previous comments. Please recheck the following
updated and revised poems:

"Sweet Blue Rain"

"So nice"

"Dead and Gone"

"Asylum"

Let me know what you think? Please respond.
| Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
I took your advice and posted your revised and updated version. Please recheck! Like it, because it reads much better in style.
| Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
I revised and updated the following poems:

"So Nice"
"Sweet Blue Rain"


Please recheck it. Let me know what you think?
| Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the comments. However, I do not want to define words to myself. I only wanted to express and show how words give and receive. Words preform good deeds and words possess a good heart. I do not get lost in what I am saying, because I try to stay focus on subject. I do not intend or want to misguide the reader. Poetry writing is not written in stone, in terms of one specific intrepretation. I welcome different opinions too. I have a passion for writing good poetry and I do not write these poem to waste people's time. I want people to gain something positive from each poem delivered.
On future comments and suggestions, please provide me concrete examples. Then I can follow your logical conclusions and review of my poetry. Please respond?
| Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -



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