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Name: Mel Doe
ASL: 38/f/uk
Website:[ Education ]
Days Away: 1681
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Signup Date: 6137 D
16.81 Years 1.68 Quote:
They may not remember exactly what you said, but they will remember exactly how it made them feel.

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Waters Edge by FireFly747
My sould is my own! (revised) by Poetic
"To understand" by Akai_Ame
Daddy's Burning Out by LossOfHope03
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I revised and updated poem!! Please recheck it!!
Thanks for the suggestions. If it does not read better, I will make other changes to gain affect. Please respond?
| Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
Thanks for the positive comments on my poem titled, "Broken Wing" This poem is full of magic!
| Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
Hey Mel

Thanks for the comments about 'What joy in absence'. It was a dark period in my life that had me dragging myself out of depression quite often.
The ryhming is something I am still working on.

Thanks again

'On On'

| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Ocker7290 - [ Reply to This ] -
It's exactly what I wanted out of "Shock". My mind was indeed, working in overtime. I wanted a sense of confusion, anger, shock, etc. to resonate with this short freewrite.

Thanks for your comment on "Shock"!

| Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by Raging Rain - [ Reply to This ] -
Thanks for your comment on "The Hymn". I'm really glad it affected you as it did. mae
| Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by mae - [ Reply to This ] -
Thank you for the comment a favorites add. i'm glad you enjoyed the piece i think... even more than that though, i'm glad that i could write it and get it out.

About the "i forgive you" line... to me, its not a feeling. i actually wrote that a couple of months back, but just revised it yesterday. then today i posted something completely different on the same subject. which explains the "i forgive you" in the last poem, it's called "Rebirth". although i know it's not as good, because it's a bit all over the place, i think you would understand the last one, if you read this one. anyway, thanks again for the for the favs add, and the comment.
| Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by Poetic - [ Reply to This ] -

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