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    Mood: The Usual
      
    "How Can It Be"

    I am guilty
    Ashamed of what I've done, what I've become
    These hands are dirty
    I dare not lift them up to the Holy One

    You plead my cause, you right my wrongs
    You break my chains, you overcome
    You gave your life, to give me mine
    You say that I am free
    How can it be? Yeah
    How can it be? Yeah

    I've been hiding
    Afraid I've let you down
    [Album version:] Inside I doubt, that you still love me
    [Video version:] Inside I doubt, that you could love me
    But in your eyes, there's only grace now

    You plead my cause, you right my wrongs
    You break my chains, you overcome
    You gave your life, to give me mine
    You say that I am free
    How can it be? Yeah
    How can it be? Yeah

    Though I fall, you can make me new
    From this death, I will rise with you
    Oh, the grace reaching out for me, yeah
    How can it be, how can it be?

    You plead my cause, you right my wrongs
    You break my chains, you overcome
    You gave your life, to give me mine
    You say that I am free, yeah

    You plead my cause, you right my wrongs
    You break my chains, you overcome
    You gave your life, to give me mine
    You say that I am free
    How can it be? Yeah
    How can it be? Yeah


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    I feel for you that you don't have any companions in God. I mean as an agnostic christian I guess I'm not really much help. Don't you have any calvary chapels near you? They're notorious for attracting the truly devout jesus freaks, with weekly meetings and activities and discussion groups. My dad found religious happiness and satisfaction there before he died. When I went to college the jesus people had their own club, there were quite a few members. One of their guitar playing hotties took a fancy to me and we dated for a couple of months. I taught her "If You Could Read My Mind" by Gordon Lightfoot and we parted ways.

    I thank you too for the long standing relationship. Our friendship means a lot to me.
    | Posted on 2016-12-30 10:52:48 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh life is pretty good, other than the fact that I just got over a cold I've got no complaints. A few of my friends are suffering…parents dying, broken foot, slipped disk in the neck. I guess nothings perfect……we cope. Still not playing guitar and singing much, or writing poetry either. My daughter has a new beau. He lives in England and she's going to go visit him there and meet him in person for the first time. I mean sure they picture scype on the telephone but it's just not the same as having an actual body to hold. I finally got a smart phone, no more little flip phone for me. Now I've got all the bells and whistles. Man they are complicated little critters. I've had it for three weeks now and I still make mistakes and forget what I'm doing. I have a new grand niece named Sarah my sister's kid Melissa graced me with. She's cute as a button and not much of a cry and screamer. Well enough about me, january 18th, how does one go about knowing the exact day??? Have your female friends in the church become more available to talk about religious experience and joy in god. I remember you said they were disconcertingly distant there. Hows life in general…….other than the fact your 9 months pregnant of course?

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-12-29 11:05:50 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    What can I say, my wife was a definite waddler though like you towards the end she was definitely looking forward to not having to carry the little munchkin around inside her belly any longer. Four to six weeks, hum, almost here. I can't imagine how that must feel to incubate a fetus to maturity. Your amazing critter. Hope you have an easy delivery. Give me a shout out after you recover.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-12-19 11:12:52 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey prego
    It must be getting close to baby time at your house. I can almost see you waddling around patiently. Let me know if it's a boy or a girl. God, the miracle of birth. Women are so amazing. We'll talk later.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-12-17 10:52:38 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for all the wonderful comments and kind words.
    I will return the blessing soon. I a bit busy these days.

    And you are correct, there is a theme in my poetry that may tend to have the same references. Some are intentional as these are raw 2-4th drafts and need polishing and work, most are purposed.

    Thanx again

    JP
    | Posted on 2016-12-15 14:32:25 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment
    you want Iambic pentameter?

    How about a crown of SONNETS in Iambic Pentameter?

    Check out my
    "I am a salesman"

    thanks
    your friend

    BenCollier
    | Posted on 2016-11-24 09:27:02 | by BenCollier - [ Reply to This ] -



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