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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: lori_tab
    Name: Jazmine Swaim
    ASL: 27/f/alabama
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    Mood: The Usual
      
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    An evening with Kevin Smith at the rhyman auditorium in Nashville. I'm a big Hank Williams SR fan. The holy Tabernacle!

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    What can I say, my wife was a definite waddler though like you towards the end she was definitely looking forward to not having to carry the little munchkin around inside her belly any longer. Four to six weeks, hum, almost here. I can't imagine how that must feel to incubate a fetus to maturity. Your amazing critter. Hope you have an easy delivery. Give me a shout out after you recover.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-12-19 11:12:52 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey prego
    It must be getting close to baby time at your house. I can almost see you waddling around patiently. Let me know if it's a boy or a girl. God, the miracle of birth. Women are so amazing. We'll talk later.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-12-17 10:52:38 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for all the wonderful comments and kind words.
    I will return the blessing soon. I a bit busy these days.

    And you are correct, there is a theme in my poetry that may tend to have the same references. Some are intentional as these are raw 2-4th drafts and need polishing and work, most are purposed.

    Thanx again

    JP
    | Posted on 2016-12-15 14:32:25 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment
    you want Iambic pentameter?

    How about a crown of SONNETS in Iambic Pentameter?

    Check out my
    "I am a salesman"

    thanks
    your friend

    BenCollier
    | Posted on 2016-11-24 09:27:02 | by BenCollier - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Lori, thank you for your comment on Hologram. I think you understood it perfectly. It's more of a visual piece, if you look at it as a whole, it has a slight optical illusion effect around the middle. Way back then, that's what I was really passionate about, the overall format of poems. That's not to say it doesn't have a meaning and a message, if I were to put it in simple words it's: always search for more. I haven't written much in the last years, so I don't have many poems to post here but after reading some stuff here I got inspired and wrote a new poem. I'll post that one here and maybe I'll write some more...
    | Posted on 2016-10-31 22:14:51 | by Paradox - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello again!!

    Wow, appreciate the comments and favorites addition of "Compelled Through Dust.'

    It was one of those things that came to me in an instant, and it did so just before I met my husband who lived in a different country and 1800 miles away.

    Funny how things like that go.

    Hope you are content wherever you are.

    Erin
    | Posted on 2016-09-01 00:54:44 | by BlankSheet - [ Reply to This ] -



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