--Elite Writer Alias: lovedeathsdeath Name: Jeremy Norris ASL: 20/M/NCUSA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 3329 Life Story: Chasing the wind [ Ignore User ]
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You're welcome for the comment on April or May, it was a good poem; it made you ask some questions. In spite of everything is probably one of my favorite poems I've written. My poetry tends to be filled with hyperbolic metaphors and such and this one was much more simple. No fluff, it felt more raw to write, even more to recite. It also didn't have the same kind of flow most of my poems do. Thanks again for the comment and by the way, I really like the gunshot/comma line too.