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Thanks for another review
(I really will pay them back one of these days)
I see what you mean about the angsty start, I never noticed before.
In your opinion, do you think it would tone it down if it was lengthened with a kind of intro before the chorus?
I will try to change it tonight either way.
(It's not often I do that on advice)
If you like the style (NOT fishing for comments) I have a poem called Tears of a ... that is pretty much the same.
You asked about the Ron prank banner; what Jimmy did was he put it at the top where the usual banner is, so it was seen from everywhere on ES. That was a funny day...everyone was bugging out. Ron himself missed it too, though.
If you noted the description to "Stood Down," You would have noted it was a farmers' forum. The fourth and fifth lines of first stanza is the answer to the first and second question. If nothing but meat was raised or nothing but wheat was raised people would die from mal nutrition, thus is the entry onto the stage of the hearse. Thus the moderator having answered the question requests the questioner to take a seat.
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