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Name: Jeremy Norris
ASL: 20/M/NCUSA
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14.55 Years 1.45 Quote:
The littlest fox will destroy the greatest of vineyards.


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I just don't know what to do. I guess that's the point.


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Featured: For The 29th of September

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 Black Hole Butterfly
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 The Softest Bed Brings the Worst Sleep
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 With Deepest Regards
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 Five Become Seventeen
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 April or May?
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 Dodge This or Die Standing Here
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 Wisdom is She
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 Derelict
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 Phantasma
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 Unfinished (and therefore untitled)
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 TEAOS
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 Warrior Soul
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 Trinity
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 Shed No Tears For We Share the Same Earth
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 Darkness Uncoveer Us
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Thankyou for your comment on my write. I personally do not like my poems. I feel like something is completly wrong. I don't know.

I know that sounds strange, but, I am sure you at least slightly understand.

Thanks again. As you notice I don't get comments much.
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| Posted on 2010-02-17 14:25:56 | by xxiknownowxx - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Dropping in to say a sweet hello. :]

Write or just submit more! Or either show it to me! I want to see your writing....please.
| Posted on 2010-01-30 03:15:51 | by xxiknownowxx - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Your last one that you wrote "The softest bread brings the worst sleep" sounds kind of emoish.
Just thought I would say.
I couldn't find the comment button.
| Posted on 2009-12-06 22:38:45 | by xxiknownowxx - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks. I just finished school for the year. Probably work on some more poems. (:

~Steph.
| Posted on 2009-05-08 12:05:56 | by xXCptn_SephyXx - [ Reply to This ] -
  
i see... ok I understand why now

by the way.. this is my response to your response on the Haiku about the haiku....


I could see how that would be interesting, but like I said the idea of Haiku's baffle me....

maybe one day I will warm up to them

thanks for taking the time to answer

Andrea
| Posted on 2009-04-26 14:29:13 | by ladydeathstrike - [ Reply to This ] -
  
You're welcome for the comment on April or May, it was a good poem; it made you ask some questions. In spite of everything is probably one of my favorite poems I've written. My poetry tends to be filled with hyperbolic metaphors and such and this one was much more simple. No fluff, it felt more raw to write, even more to recite. It also didn't have the same kind of flow most of my poems do. Thanks again for the comment and by the way, I really like the gunshot/comma line too.

-Eli
| Posted on 2009-04-21 23:50:47 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -



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