--Elite Writer Alias: lynxstarfire Name: Lynx Starfire ASL: 26/Feline/MD Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 2664 Life Story: Writer/Artist [ Ignore User ]
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I am Transferring all my poetry off of Deviantart for good because basically it's a pretty lame site, and most people don't want to give you comments more than "oh that's good" or "great job" or "cool" and it irritates me when thats really all someone can find to say so over the course of the next few weeks i'll be posting all of what i have posted over there, including my prose and adult-fiction. so lots of new stuff from me to read and crit.
I just read 'Society Sucks in 189 Words'. I must say, it sounded a little choppy. I do not know if you're still on here, but I thought I'd let you know. Overall, it is very powerful. It reminds me of someone seeing things with distorted vision. Good luck with everything you do.
Hey i think you're so right, deviantart sucks i just gave up posting on that long ago, if you go on my page the ppl literally say,"Nice" or "Cool" it's like seriously open your mind...you're no artist if these are all you can say.
You caught the meaning of the poem, Six Strings perfectly. I wrote that for my son who is a writer/performer/guitarist. And definately, the guitar owns him. Thanks so much for the read and your very kind words. Carol