Thankyou for taking the time to read and comment on "The Inner Demon" and "Demoness". You did a nice take on that last stanza, but I guess I was keeping it simple, lol.
I don't claim to be better than anyone and I do not go around bragging so. I'm just different and unique with my own style. Believe me, I've read stuff from 13 yr olds that can put me to shame, lol. I'm more than glad to help others reach greatness.