--Elite Writer Alias: madhatress Name: Ava Williams Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4920 Life Story: mostbeautifical [ Ignore User ]
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Hey, I know it's a little late but I just wanted to thank you for your comments on those two pieces of mine. One of them was really old, and one was my latest so I guess you got a good idea of how my work has progressed over the years. Really appreciate it.
Hey Ava, thanks for commenting on "petals and stems." I'm glad you liked, and your favorites addition is very exciting.
I did indeed heed jason's suggestions (they're often quite good), as well broke it into different strophes. Ah, but the last line, "This place has cancer, but it's also dying." Well, what I mean by that is "this place" is dying for more than just the biological ailments and such surrounding us. Perhaps that clarifies that?
Thank you again, tis' very appreciated.
I will be by sometime (soonish, in fact) to read through your work.
Thanks for reading darfur, not my greatess work but I wanted to write again. I generally don't worry much about offending people if i think I can help. If it's useful critisim then I'm fine with it a lot of people disagree with the subject or perspective, but perspective creates an individual's reality. Who are we to judge. Any help with grammar is greatly aprreciated. I general write about 50 percent and rap the other half. I focus more on the sound, but I've never learned proper grammar and I'm more of and audio learner than visual so books are no help anyway I'm rambling. thanks again
Thanks for reading darfur, not my greatess work but I wanted to write again. I generally don't worry much about offending people if i think I can help. If it's useful critisim then I'm fine with it a lot of people disagree with the subject or perspective, but perspective creates an individual's reality. Who are we to judge. Any help with grammar is greatly aprreciated. I general write about 50 percent and rap the other half. I focus more on the sound, but I've never learned proper grammar and I'm more of and audio learner than visual so books are no help anyway I'm rambling. thanks again
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