--Elite Writer Alias: manicsmuse Name: Angela Doe ASL: 28 Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 663 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1807 D 4.95 Years 0.5 Decades 60.23 Months 258.14 Weeks 1.807000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: ~* "If a man should give me arguments that I do not see, though I could not answer them, should I believe that I do not see?" *~
everything you said was correct . it was deep, a little too deep for my own liking and tastes. but i didn't feel it was completely out of character for my typical writes hehe.
you'd do much better to just read the line by line analysis given by both authors on that piece. my description would be...well its just not something that i would all-too-much enjoy typing in a reply. i can speak much faster than i type heh.
and on Girl in the Photo. thank you so much for that. yeah, i was wondering if i'd ever get another comment on that one. the meaning was quite simple, even if entrenched in the bowels superfluous description...
Thanks for commenting on "The song of love" I actaully implemented some of you suggestions, though it will still be just as long. It works with the chords. Thanks again Pursuit of life