ahh finally someone commented on that "untitled" crap. it was just something i spit out in like 2 minutes, but i meant every bit of it and it all came straight from my burning heart. and i agree, my sh!t that rhymes is way better.
thanks for comment on my poems. I'm sorry make you feel that way. lol. i think others feel the same as you did, but that is the way i write. Undone work, keep me continue. i keep them untitle, b/c i couldn't find a best title for them and i think they shouldn't have a titile. take care!