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Thank you for commenting on But, Mom! In reality, I don't really have a problem with Mom nagging. It's more with my brother and sister...but it's pretty much a universal inspiration. I'm always glad to hear that my writing has communicated with or affected someone in a positive way...even if it's more of an annoying memory than a positive one...
And I apologize for being vague... but my point is... since you already believe that it is "love" then it no longer needs to be a fact because it is already a fact. You don't really need the concerned party's affirmation for it to be made real.
Anyway, after reading your piece again, I think I see the point where we misunderstood each other.
I think what you meant by using the word "fact" was for the concerned party to know that he is being loved.
Am I right?
Anyway... thank you for the time. And again, for the comment, you're welcome.
The wall is what you want it to be. That sounds kindof cliché but I really dont know what I originally intended. So you can fill in the blank. I think thats how its supposed to be with poetry, the reader can take whatever they want from it and be right. Thanks for reading and commenting. It means alot.
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