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Re: Anti-determinism Hi Mimi, Thanks for the review. SOrry it took me so long to get back to you. Your thoughts ae very much appreciated. Ahhh, well the poem is all about chaos - Parmenadise and other dusty philosphers. It sort of teases at some cunumdrums of philosophy and physics, flirts with a bit of cognitve science and challenges conventional wisdom on the nature of chaos it's self. I would have to say it really isn't as deep as all that, the approach is rather shallow in so far as the subjects merit more but the poem is surely more entertaining than any book it could spawn. So thanks again and I will be returning the favor soon.

| Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by Car va g o - [ Reply to This ] -

Re: Drift Wood Thanks for the review of drift wood. It is one of my faovrites although I feel uneasy with the opening. My Favorite Favorite part is the closing it has a classical rehtorical structure. That part of the poem both works for and against the overall esthetic. Thanks again.

| Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by Car va g o - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks girl for your comments on Cinderella No More. I've been gone out of town, that is why it took so long to reply. Yeah, that song is one of my all time favorites. Catrina

| Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele - [ Reply to This ] -

thanx

| Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the the advice. I'll see if I can fix it to make it a little better.

| Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by PiperH - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the comment on Without. Peace! Katana

| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko - [ Reply to This ] -

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