--Elite Writer Alias: misschalloner Name: Crystal Challoner ASL: 21.F.NV Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: I'm not done. [ Ignore User ]
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:) Thanks for the great comments, you sure are brave to go treading where no one (especially men) dare to tromp LOL! Something I said, I suppose...
I like the alternative title too. I changed titles once after a post, and someone was fussy over it, I think of the better title ONLY after coming up with a worse first, almost always. Titles usually take longer than the whole poem.
Scared, huh? I must add that up there with the statement that I made one guy here "impotent." It's a gift you know, shrinking hard-ons... God just blessed me in the oddest ways. bwahahahaha
I found your comment on my vent very intreging. Just so you know Everything I write comes strait from the heart and my vent was me clearing the last of my feelings over my cheating ex. Life can at times be horrible to a person but the thing is that we must all try and find the light tha guides us all, ot to sound religous. But try and think of life as something that must be lived do everything ty everything as long as you are faithful to your love and you will be unstopable.
OMG, didn't anyone tell you I'm crass and vulgar and horrible yet??? I didn't mean to shock you, I thought they'd thrown up a flag attached to my initial first comment with that warning notice: "Easily Offends Others." Double OMG, that means my club shock collar fell off and I'm free to reak havoc... yay!!!
Seriously tho, I didn't think french-kissing was bad? (Was your mind in the gutter or what???) ;)
thanks for the read on Consilience. Its hard to break down my mindset when writing. I actually have a lot of trouble mentally agreeing on what a good poem even is, so my own writing is always just a stab in the dark. At the time I was pretty upset that I see my girlfriend as rarely as I do I guess, but just like all emotions, and all life situations, there is a lot more depth to things than that. the city in the poem is Columbus, the road from me to her is high street, etc. Not everything is that grounded in the literal, but as long as you read the poem and try to pull a message from the whole and not any one part you'll probably get it.
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