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    Journal: vuelvo?
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    You never notice the return of the ones you didn't miss.

    Perhaps I'll go unnoticed.


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    Featured: pizza hut, 6:47 pm

     routine
    :|| V: 873 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Venting : Class : Random Thoughts :
     Complete
    :|| V: 687 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Random Thoughts :
     In our bed (revised)
    :|| V: 598 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Nostalgia : Class : Poetry :
     Dead End
    :|| V: 724 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Story :
     If it had been a girl
    :|| V: 656 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Random Thoughts :
     reborn
    :|| V: 918 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     apparently opaque
    :|| V: 1265 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     confession
    :|| V: 924 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     bitter autumn
    :|| V: 1056 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Romance : Class : Poetry :
     And You Call Me Picasso
    :|| V: 1058 | C: 3 ||:
    :: : Class : Misc :
     tainted.
    :|| V: 1063 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     soliloquy
    :|| V: 987 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Prose :
     Flickers (Pt. 1)
    :|| V: 1019 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Memories far sweeter
    :|| V: 1051 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Nostalgia : Class : Poetry :
     sleep's disruption
    :|| V: 1026 | C: 7 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     comfortable
    :|| V: 1298 | C: 7 ||:
    ::Romance : Class : Misc :
     Sunday Morning
    :|| V: 1190 | C: 6 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Misc :
     unfolding
    :|| V: 1216 | C: 7 ||:
    :: : Class : Random Thoughts :
     clear empty truths
    :|| V: 1130 | C: 11 ||:
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     autumn stroll
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    You're welcome :)
    | Posted on 2010-06-15 20:57:24 | by O - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey! Thanks for your comment! Yeah I'm here still! Not writing, and when I do I don't post on here that much. :)
    | Posted on 2010-06-14 22:40:41 | by borderlinetears - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the critique of my poem I may try some of your suggestions.
    | Posted on 2010-06-13 09:23:09 | by thepulse - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    the
    rain is
    a million
    rosewood xylophone bars
    striking each other
    as they
    fall

    Yep, rain falls. Raindrops fall. But here 'they fall' refers directly to the plural 'rosewood xylophone bars.' I went for not only the music of rain, but this (metaphorical) image of xylophone bars actually striking one another as they fall.

    The sound of rain; the image of rain (in a sense).

    Thank you for the comment.

    Take care,
    Alia
    | Posted on 2010-06-13 00:31:21 | by O - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Poem Name "Wrath"....
    oops lots of mistakes...:-)
    Am correcting the ones you noted down for me...Thanks for that...

    Also adding a small description...got the idea how a reader might be a little off while reading the poem...

    Death List obtained from a cartoon called bleach(Japanese)
    | Posted on 2010-06-12 23:53:06 | by keestu - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    http://www.eliteskills.com/z/18755

    I just wrote a letter to one that makes me feel this way...his eyes can always burn a whole through my soul and set my heart on fire
    we dated twice and both times fell apart but enough about me...you've nailed it in this piece, the feeling of intense passion and awkward pretenses in order to deal with the situation at hand which in this case I feel is that you can't Be together but you'll never forget the wonder of each other at the same time...i miss you and your Beauty
    | Posted on 2009-10-02 22:15:58 | by clay - [ Reply to This ] -



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