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mjstrees


Name: John Doe
ASL: 18/M/Ocean City MD
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Life Story: Ive had a rough life
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my name is dan
you can call me stan
I like to play piano
got mark 2 grand

I like to cook ham
like a butcher named sam
except I cook with sauce
cause Im the boss

Chorus(
sam sam
hes like the ham
but late at night
he likes some pam
sprays it on his fingers
taste like chicken
a smell that really lingers
taste like chicken


PAAAAAAAMMMMMMM

WE LOVE YOU SEATTLE
GOOD NIGHT!


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i am glad to have nailed it...
and thank you for your comment...
guilty as charged about the "dot dot dot"...

LOL...i still doing the dot dot dot now
>.<

but in that piece i was trying to make it seem like the notes fading away...
| Posted on 2007-05-23 09:28:12 | by rubymoon - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the comment on my poem "A Rose Forgotten" - I really appreciate it!

Cheers and God bless,

~Mandi~
| Posted on 2007-05-22 14:20:25 | by Mandi Gayle - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your comment on "World's Lullaby" It was well appreciated. I'll take the time to go over and revise all my stuff one day. Hah. Anyway, thank you again...and welcome to Elite! I'll be sure to check out your stuff soon.

-Sandi
| Posted on 2007-05-22 14:07:54 | by Dimension_X - [ Reply to This ] -
  
well thank you dearly for sharing your opinion on important [censored], and i will try my hardest to work on this and make it more, thanks again

xoxo
| Posted on 2007-05-22 07:48:55 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks muchly for the comment. I'm glad you liked the form, that was pretty much the whole point of that poem, to work it that way.

As for cliché......yes I'm working on that too. Always been a problem of mine.

Thanks again!

~Keiran~
| Posted on 2007-05-21 22:49:53 | by Keiran - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Welcome to ES.
| Posted on 2007-05-21 08:30:34 | by Katlord - [ Reply to This ] -



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