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    Hi Ray, thanks for commenting on my poem. It was a helpful comment as it's an older poem and it might help if I reassess the format. Appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2014-08-30 19:54:14 | by emwren - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Re comments: "A Dog's Life"

    Thanks for your comment Ray.

    "your images are very vivid,this is good imagery.
    i know most people find this behavior shocking, that you write about and it is and yet there's worst out there. well written.
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by danativ - [ Reply to This ] -



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