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    Journal: Loneliness
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    Mood: Lonely
      
    Life is long if you are lonely.


    ...Created 2006-11-18 09:30:17     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Sleep
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     17th December
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     The birth of Music
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    ::Comedy : Class : Poetry :
     The First Poem
    :|| V: 579 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     A Forlorn Heart
    :|| V: 656 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Unrequited
    :|| V: 749 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Blasphemy II
    :|| V: 520 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Misc :
     Kind Illusions
    :|| V: 789 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Confusion
    :|| V: 1049 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Friendship : Class : Story :
     R.I.P.
    :|| V: 489 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Heart Shaped Moon
    :|| V: 649 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Requiem for a Spring Night
    :|| V: 708 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Ten past love
    :|| V: 561 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Market Elasticity
    :|| V: 491 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     A lonely October Night
    :|| V: 619 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     The son of a plumber
    :|| V: 877 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Prose :
     March
    :|| V: 628 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Sleight Of Hand
    :|| V: 815 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Purgatory
    :|| V: 780 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Prose :
     A beautiful Evening
    :|| V: 820 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Nature : Class : Poetry :
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    Moazzam, thank you for coming by and for commenting on "The Magic Of Autumn" and "Where Courage Is The Promise". The words dark and but are necessary for the meter of the poem (it goes off meter if the words are taken out); however, your comments did inspire me to change the wording to a better effect (I think). Your critique helped improve the poem, and I thank you.
    | Posted on 2011-10-04 12:58:25 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Thanx for your feedback on my poems. Have a nice day!
    | Posted on 2008-01-17 20:31:21 | by Maverique - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you very much for your comments on my poems. I really appreciate you reading them and telling me what you think of them.
    | Posted on 2008-01-16 23:14:24 | by silentpoison - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thx for the comment on "a good lawyer". I put quite a bit of thought into the structure & it really pays when someone understands the type of ideas I'm putting out there..:D
    | Posted on 2008-01-15 18:04:32 | by Mark Huntsman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comments on Exposed Mediocraty....I know it isnt the most lovely of prose, it was more of a vent to ramble my worldly frustrations. I appreciate you taking the time to share and elaborate you thoughts.
    <3 Nica
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by beldolore - [ Reply to This ] -



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