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    "I'd walk a mile in your shoes just to scuff them up."
    - mojymo

    "You can safely assume that you've created God in your own image when it turns out that God hates all the same people you do.”
    --Anne Lamott

    "We are not special. We are not crap or trash, either. We just are. We just are, and what happens just happens.”
    --Chuck Palahniuk

    "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."
    —Frieda Norris


    ...Created 2009-12-09 22:18:45     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Featured: The Angels Cry Tonight

     Miss Me
    :|| V: 880 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Loving Every Little Bit
    :|| V: 644 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Poetry :
     Without Running Shoes
    :|| V: 533 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Knight Light
    :|| V: 587 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Summer King
    :|| V: 523 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Trust Me, I'm Trying
    :|| V: 717 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Poetry :
     Cleaning Up After
    :|| V: 612 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Comedy : Class : Poetry :
     More Than Anything
    :|| V: 602 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     The Memory of My Mother
    :|| V: 782 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Poetry's New Dictator
    :|| V: 626 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Backbone
    :|| V: 518 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Under My Skin
    :|| V: 585 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Abort This Child!
    :|| V: 805 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Crumpets and Tea
    :|| V: 659 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Fighting Off the Saints
    :|| V: 600 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Angst : Class : Poetry :
     Said the Druggie to His Sister
    :|| V: 818 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Scum
    :|| V: 567 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Up Close
    :|| V: 639 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Rape (NOT your average pity story)
    :|| V: 828 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Monotony (Whoops. My bad, MyX)
    :|| V: 680 | C: 3 ||:
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    Oophs! Meant "my back" wouldn't work as well.
    | Posted on 2010-01-02 11:11:13 | by my shadow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I don't have a problem with "our backs" as one reviewer did. I visualize you, your missed one, and an entire class in this description of drudgery. It would not work as well as "my back". At first, I thought Miss Me was going to be self-pitying, but got caught up more as I read it and then the last lines brought it all around. This is a love poem.
    | Posted on 2010-01-02 11:06:42 | by my shadow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Ah My dear Mojy, thanks for your great feedback on "Roses" i am glad you enjoyed it somewhat, i I will be returning to see your great works when they are ready. Hope you had a fabulistic christmas and all is well in Mojyland!
    | Posted on 2009-12-28 03:15:12 | by Clayman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yes, of course you have my permission to use the line; I'm glad that it inspired you. I'm also glad that you enjoyed those writings...They are old ones of mine and yes, I too find phrasing a bit repetitive. Let me know when you finish the piece that the line inspired, I'm interested in reading it.
    | Posted on 2009-12-15 04:08:29 | by bkj43 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You sound like a necrophiliac.
    Thanks for the comments Edward Cullen, and the favorites addition.
    | Posted on 2009-12-12 15:33:26 | by JenFlynn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for the comment
    | Posted on 2009-12-11 18:01:26 | by hyproglo - [ Reply to This ] -



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