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    I would greatly appreciate your opinions on the two poems I have posted today as they are quite different then my usual writting and I find them to be of higher quality, If you could do me this simple favor I would greatly appreciate it.


    Obsidian
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by obsidiandreams - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Mon

    Writing this one from the other perspective was a little challenging. You are trying to second guess what that individual might be feeling. When you loved that person you hope you might know what they would of thought even in the after life.

    Thanks for the comments.

    'On On'

    Ocker
    | Posted on 2006-09-26 00:00:00 | by Ocker7290 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Monica,
    Thank you for your comment on 'Thank you', and thanks for your kind words.
    Tom
    | Posted on 2006-09-26 00:00:00 | by Tom110989 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Ta Mon

    The piece is from a different perspective, mainly because as I wrote it I was feeling the little fellow in my head and he was telling me how he felt. Its been a few years now since we lost him and all the family and friends still pine for him.

    I will continue to check out your work.

    'On On'

    Ocker
    | Posted on 2006-09-26 00:00:00 | by Ocker7290 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I liked your suggestions on the poem, thank you for the perspecive.
    I had no idea you couldn't do that, I'm not suggesting annything incestual at all, I'll look through that promise!
    and I'm curious, where did you learn swedish? or get to know those phrases. It's not an all that common language.
    //The Litle Good Wolf
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Wolfie - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I liked your suggestions on the poem, thank you for the perspecive.
    I had no idea you couldn't do that, I'm not suggesting annything incestual at all, I'll look through that promise!
    and I'm curious, where did you learn swedish? or get to know those phrases. It's not an all that common language.
    //The Litle Good Wolf
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Wolfie - [ Reply to This ] -



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