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    Journal: Lousy
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    Mood: Sigh...
      
    Thus describes my poetic ability.
    Just looking back on my writings now that I'm "back" and...I'm very lame. Pfft.


    ...Created 2007-02-03 23:40:03     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Thanks for stopping by and checking out "Don't Bring Me Roses." The word 'pleasanter' is not grammatically correct - in fact, its not even a word. I made it up. I like it for its whimsy which seems - to me - to fit that particular series of lines. But you're not the first person to mention it, so I suppose I should change it. Sigh.

    Re: the last line, I honestly think if I fancied up that line, it would take away from its impact.

    And you know, I think I originally had my line structure different than it is here (for the tsunami stanza that is 4 lines rather than 3). That stanza should just be 3 lines because the whole poem has clipped along in perfect symmetry. I'll have to look at that. Thanks for point it out.

    I appreciate your comments.

    mae
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 11:36:40 | by mae - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment and fav add dear. i'll get around to commentin back.

    have aswell day,
    -Kate
    | Posted on 2006-09-27 00:00:00 | by MyFairCalamity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Malinda

    Thanks for that constructive critique. I will rectify those anomalies post haste.

    'On On'

    Ocker
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Ocker7290 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey im from tha western half to but up more.. towards gardner if u no where that is if not its west of fitchburg n worcestor around there.. n its all good aboutt tha respond havent had much time to get on here either n give ppl comments lately..

    <3 Brittaney-Mae
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi, I'm just stopping by to say thank you for your comments on Cosmos of Fire. Much appreciated. ~chris :)
    | Posted on 2006-08-09 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh, thnx for the suggestions. I changed them. By the way, I would have never noticed the "sorry" since it was a typo. It was meant to be "sorrow" otherwise it does not even make sense. Heh

    thnx

    peace
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by forestspirit - [ Reply to This ] -



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