--Elite Writer Alias: narcolepsy Name: Shawnee Lynn ASL: 19/F/Pa Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 441 Life Story: Life? What life? [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 3 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5691 D 15.59 Years 1.56 Decades 189.7 Months 813 Weeks 5.691000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: keep on keepin' on.
Shit. I know this is my therapy. No one is probably ever going to read this and the people that used to be on Eliteskills that knew me better and actually had thoughts of value aren't here anymore. Except maybe TJ, if you're reading this. But looking back on my poems and the comments left, most of you are jackasses. Most of these poems weren't meant for anyone I knew in real life to see, so I had freedom here to write about whatever the hell I wanted without anyone knowing what I was writing about. And MAYBE... JUST MAYBE... you all should try reading the DESCRIPTIONS before you read the goddamned POEM. UH DUH. Kthanksbye.
thank you for your comment on my poem "I wonder if i smile in my sleep". I'm glad you liked it. It has been a REALLY long time since I wrote actually, and its kinda nice to get back to the flow, even though i'm a wee bit rusty. thank you for your comment!
i understand what your saying about 'let it unfold' i wrote it about this girl who was beautiful but couldn’t realize it because she surrounded herself with this made-up pre madonna’s who live day to day changing to fit their surroundings, getting their personalities from the latest vogue. it was sad to me because this girl was the obvious outsider, not being a size double zero and not having the bleach blonde locks like her other 'friends' and they would take pictures laugh and have fun but it was always that one girl behind the camera taking pictures of all the other girls living the life she so desperately wants never being in any of the pictures later to be harsh memories. so ya i wrote it bout that mainly. its obscure sounding and i may change that im not sure, but it gave me that sickening feeling for her hoping that she would realize she is so beautiful without have to paste on trendy clothes and a false smile. hope this helps. thx for reading :-)