Hey thanks for commenting on my poem, i am currently feeling retarded and cannot figure out how to reply on your poems, so i shall comment on your poem here, One of my favourites was "love"
I liked the way you set it out and if would actually never guess you are 12
You are actually thinking about love,
when i was 12 i loved my toys. lol
Anyway i loved this poem as it showed in depth reason into the way you see love, i do not know what i typed but it sounded technical for, 'i liked the way you wrote this poem"
Now onto my other favourite, (I dont really know how to rate your stoires cos im not that much of a reader anymore) A call can change everything
I liked how you did not explain what the call was about yet you left ideas and inspiration filling the brim of myh mind, could it be a rapist, could it be a bad line. But the title really makes me think, i loved it :D, it could mean so many things... one thing it reminded me of the most was someone fighting for life it may be house on in the background but yes it definately made me think of that.
Sorry if this message offends you
If so can you send all exploding mail via hannah montana thankyou
Hey welcome to ES.
Wow you've got a lot of writes posted quick; thats great.
Just a suggestion, you might want to start commenting on other peoples writes to get your %Reciprocated up. And it would be nice if you gave yourself a name and post a bio just so people can get to know you better. This is a friendly site, jump right in the forums and the shoutbox, everyones cool for the most part. Catch later.