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    close on "one and two and three", i was actually picturing a mother (a depressed drunk obviously)who neglected her children and eventually lost all three, hence the last lines "poking holes through clouds", but thanks for the comment..always appreciated
    | Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by shmurr - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    could you comment on my poetry please?
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    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko - [ Reply to This ] -



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