Name: Kendra Cole
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To the world you are one person, but to one person you may be the world.
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Hey, K. How's your writing coming? Got anything new that I missed. I hope I was able to help with your writer's block. It's gone now, right? Please say yes...
Anyways, just checkin' up.
|| Posted on 2007-08-28 17:22:38 | by Lizzy B - [ Reply to This ] -|
Wow, I just signed into this site for the first time in a long time to show my stuff to a friend and I found all your comments. You've made my day/week/year/life. Most of those poems are years old, like from high school, and I haven't written anything in so long. But I think you've inspired me to start up again.
p.s. I'll definitely look at your stuff.
|| Posted on 2007-08-22 23:13:38 | by Lunablue - [ Reply to This ] -|
That's okay, I'll try to clean up the extras. (No, I'm not SeriousCutter..I wouldn't call myself that anyway, not a big fan of, you know, cutting myself...ow...)
Wow, that's so cool that my writing actually cheers you up; that's good incentive for me.
I actually recently wrote something, I might post it soon; I'd rather that my sister didn't see it, she and little brother would have a field day teasing me. I'm half way between thinking it's okay and thinking it sucks, so if I post it I'd love your opinion...(I'd appreciate it, hehe)
I'll be commenting today,btw.
|| Posted on 2007-08-18 16:18:35 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -|
Hey, thank you for the comment on Lonely. I'll have to admit, it's one of my own favorites among the poem's I've posted; I wrote it quite awhile back. About the ';' thingy (semicolon). I used to be stumped by those too; I guess I just use them wherever I feel like they'll fit; it seems more proper to me to put them at the end of a line then not.
I agree about the chorus now; I decided to put it there when I wrote it because I felt like the rhythm changed to a more repetitive pattern, like it does in a chorus; it wasn't really supposed to make them lyrics, more like a song without a tune, a spoken song, which is really what a poem is; my way of thinking.
I totally agree about reading lyrics, sometimes they seem dumb because without a tune they're just a lot of 'oh, yeah' and 'hey there' and 'ooh ooh ooh'. Who wants to read that? (That's why I try to put the most interesting and poetic and non repetitive lyrics I can find in ES M.)
"Your heart wavers on the bet"....hmm. It made sense at the time. I kind of confused it with 'wager', like to place a bet; waver means to flicker or wobble in uncertainty. It still makes sense, though. It's like a heart that waves back and forth because it's betting it's happiness on chance.
Oh, yes, and 'loneliest' wasn't supposed to rhyme with 'loneliness'; 'loneliest' was supposed to rhyme with 'emptiness'. Still off though, I know...but that's okay; I can always fix it.
Anyways, I'm glad you took the time to read it, and it is rare to get a good long comment with a lot of thoughtful detail put into to it, so thank you. I am glad you appreciated it; I appreciate that you appreciated it, and hopefully you will appreciate that I appreciate that you appreciated it.
Is the word 'appreciate' starting to look weird to you?
(It'll be my pleasure to return the favor and give you some well deserved comments on your work too.)
|| Posted on 2007-08-17 00:25:26 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -|
|| Posted on 2007-08-14 23:34:14 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -|
Avril says, "Woohoo!"
|| Posted on 2007-08-14 23:33:02 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -|