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Dude!
My family just recently came back from the Philippines. I'm not sure if I told you about my grandma living there but we just visited for 3 weeks during winter break.
I saw your last message and thought how really blessed I've been. And so I had to reply.
Well thanks so much for that comment on Joke's On Me
I really appreciated it
and no, I don't sing....or I do, but badly.
yeah, I would love to read your piece
thanks again, hope to hear more from you
I get what you mean about it maybe being more impactful if it was written differently. i was just having an ee cummings day and after I read a certain type of poetry, i start writing like that. I am like a poetry chameleon :)
when i said "go-od" separately, it was supposed to maybe read out like it said "god." The whole poem kind of sprung from ideas in the book "Blue Like Jazz" which has a part that talks about how Christians can sometimes love conditionally, and I've had a lot of meaningless "how are you" experiences with them where i'm asking myself...do you really care at all how i am? and so in the poem i was trying to give a double meaning to the word "good" and make it sound like I was saying "God" back to them. But i don't know if anyone else would catch it. I don't know. Sometimes I don't make sense haha. And this has turned out to be an unneccessarily long comment.