nicodemous

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Alias: nicodemous
Name: Nicodemous Pagee
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Sweet N' Sour Dream
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From off the Page
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Glow
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Endless Summer of Your Smile
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Pain's Remedy
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Tomorrow Forgot Yesterday
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Blessed Moon's Kisses
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Wellspring
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Jar
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Regardless
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Tulips to Two Lips
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Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. I hope to be able read some of your work when I have more time. Thanks again for your comment.

The Bird

| Posted on 2008-09-05 17:34:22 | by Swimming Bird - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey,

You commented on my piece ages ago and I never thanked you so yeah i just wanted to say thanks for the feedback,ill probably keep the line because I like it that way but its only my thoughts,maybe it does take away from the piece as you say,

anyhow thanks again

| Posted on 2008-08-23 18:20:25 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for your comment on "twenty six letters". I really appriciate your opinion, though I am not likly to re-work it only because that is not something I usually do...I certainly see what you are saying and will take it as I write again.
So, thank you again for all the things you said.

-Jenn

| Posted on 2008-07-25 00:24:03 | by joy7542 - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi there! Ambiguity is always good when it comes to poetry as each reader can inteprete the writings his own way. It was a pleasure to read your poem.

Thank you for your comment regarding Love's end. Indeed it is quite bitter. I was inspired by a dream I had concerning me and my love. In that dream he came to my house and said that we are over without any reason whatsoever, however there was a reason, but he just could not express it (which is why marbles in the hat fit so well with the poem...but i also saw them in the dream too). In the dream, I want to know why we are ending or liaison in order for me not to guess and to move on properly, more calmly. Fortunately it was just a dream.

Take care!

| Posted on 2008-07-17 19:53:29 | by wordsofmind - [ Reply to This ] -

I'm anal about words which makes me annoying in regular life. Most words that would be pronounced "a something" but spelled "asomething" are usually the negative/opposite of the same word sans the a. So, I figured and double-checked the dictionary.

Making up words is difficult. I've "made" up words to find out someone else already "made" them up. Then I've used words that I apply a lot of meaning to and then find out that they're not words recognized in any dictionary, nor can I find anything related to them by googling. So I don't post some writing because a lot of what I write makes sense to me only.

Morphous can make sense in the poem though, if you think, "morphous is a set structure, all humans grow up, and most follow the same structure of forgetting youth". amorphous makes sense in the sense that time, as an abstract, has no true definite shape beyond what we ascribe to it (linear, forward, blah blah).

Either word you choose, I think it'll make sense and certainly won't detract from the content of the piece.

| Posted on 2008-07-12 00:49:04 | by Sir Jimeth - [ Reply to This ] -

Ah, thanks. That was what I was going for with it. Though much deeper is subjective I usually consider it something with great emotional/intellectual value to an individual, which would fit for the piece.

I'll look into the collection of his if I can find it. I don't live far from a book store and walk there once a week. Their poetry section is pitiful, but maybe they'll have it and I can have a look through. Expand my literary horizons and all that.

Thanks again, I appreciate it.

| Posted on 2008-07-11 22:49:06 | by Sir Jimeth - [ Reply to This ] -

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