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    Thanks so much for your comment... sorry it took me so long to get over here to tell you that!
    | Posted on 2011-06-05 23:34:58 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You do have a point. In writing "Angel Down", I was not trying to really raise awareness for the earth. It was more of an effort to capture the essensce of a dying landscape, which could be the result of man, or perhaps simply the changing of the climate in a natural process, etc. etc. Thank you so much for your comment though, it was much appreciated :)
    | Posted on 2011-05-25 20:22:47 | by Anneboleyn707 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for reading
    | Posted on 2011-05-20 05:47:30 | by Kaddish - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your thoughts. I think Jacob summed it up perfectly before (it's about a girl I'm rather fond of).
    | Posted on 2011-05-19 18:13:19 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for commenting on "About Nothing."

    Don't feel bad about saying it falls a little flat, because I sense the same thing about this particular poem; that there is nothing specifically wrong with any of the lines on their own, but that maybe they don't belong together, or something. There is a lack of focus. Then again, this could easily be a reflection of how I am feeling... confused, and scattered.

    I tend to be pretty good at editing or revising the work of others but for some reason have trouble doing it to my own. Something I have been trying though is to take a standout line in one piece and add it to another. A collage of sorts might be fun.

    Practice does make perfect, and I definitely haven't been writing enough these days.

    Thanks again for stopping by. Everyone has a right to comment, and I always appreciate the different perspectives.

    Take Care,
    Erin
    | Posted on 2011-05-19 18:13:18 | by Soul-Hugger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks nicodemous, uh huh...good old usa here, originally from NY...

    grew up or not, there and then now in illinois..

    a kid at heart...

    thanks for your thoughts relating to "it hurts"

    oh that part of us we can't let go..or are afraid to because life seems so ephemeral.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-19 17:03:41 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -



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