--Elite Writer Alias: night_angel Name: Tasha Nicole * ASL: 22/F/MI Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 3454 Life Story: 'The Ghost' [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 31 Forum Posts: 1 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 4 Signup Date: 5356 D 14.67 Years 1.47 Decades 178.53 Months 765.14 Weeks 5.356000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: I have found that the opposite to love is not hate, indeed the opposition to true love is complete indifference. -Tasha Nicole-
Journal: The Usual -------------------------------------------
Mood: The Usual
I've been trying to write... trying and failing. I've been having dreams and they bother me. Deeply bother me... Idk what to make of them. I hope my writer's block ends soon, so I may get this off from my mind.
I'd rather not change those three pieces. They feel just right to me, the way they are. I'd hardly call them mere 'thoughts on the wall'. Granted, they are thoughts, but calling them 'thoughts on the wall' sounds demeaning and it feels like you are likening them to mere tags or graffiti.
Perhaps my mind left out details of the city on purpose. I'm not sure if you noticed, but the focus is not on city life, but rather on the simpler things (i
a lone pine cone, longing for a leisurely stroll, the song of birds in the air). I've been reading lots of Mary Oliver lately, and my mind has been subconsciously trying to shut out the city and the hustle and bustle of modern life. And thus, these kinds of poems are born.
hey thanks for the comment and favs add lol, yea that poem is now one of my bitter sweet memories. i hate writing them before they happen. im kinda getting better though would of been better if i didnt beilieve his every word but anyway thanks.