Actually my goal is to write poems that have deep meaning and philosophical value but I get your type of complaint a lot. I wrote a synopsis of this one for latentlylyrical and still have it saved, it's basically the meaning in simpler words. If you want to look at it let me know.
idk i just felt like it wasnt in sycn with the rest of the poem, artistically speaking
and a lot of the times when i read something, i perfer the language to be a lot less "common", (i really cant find a word for what i mean)
but i do mean it
You told me that you "often feel like a crazy man who is surrounded by people even crazier". I resonate with that so much that I am wondering how come I never said it myself! So I wrote it in my quote book, I guess that is a kind of fave.
thank you for your thoughts on my new post "Safe Haven". And yes I do long to forgive but it seems to be one of those tasks easier said than actually done. So many things have come abuse due to the abused I felt throughout my childhood. Positive and Negative things have happened due to the abuse I received. And I know because of the kind of childhood I had I am who I am today... Its hard not to think who would I be if it would for those actions... Thanks a bunch for your thoughts!! Sorry took so long to reply..