--Elite Writer Alias: on1eday.co.uk Name: king kong ASL: ing/y beast/x3 Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 14 Life Story: brain and site dead [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: I tried -------------------------------------------
Mood: reflexive
but they still come out the same
Like going back to a ghost house you used to live in
The furniture is gone
but the memories sit with dust and cobwebs
Do we really change or just go around in cycles
I'm sure I could still smash a back-talking computer even though I've read a hundred books
What better way to remind yourself of who you are
than coming back and putting on an old CD?
I cant really dumb it down too much,but Im sure you could get something from the poem if you wanted to,I dont want to force meanings or concepts onto the reader,that should be an organic thing
ive been by here daily the last coupla days looking to formulate a thank you for the comment you left on my piece. but it hasnt worked out. i read your comment and had to go back and read the piece you commented on to see if it was mine haha.
i know the note you spoke of...
thank you.
now i could come to your page and lash out with a vengeance not so proper or thank you for the constructive criticism...
*coughs*
you and i are but two men of different walks. yes the poem was nostalgic, but thats how it was meant to be written.
a vanity piece, as was indicated in its description, written to be understood by another member of ES.
yeah, i got lazy and slacked off, only so that its meaning could be communicated to the other viewers on this site also, so i offer you a challenge old friend...
could i have you please check out "Girl in the Photo" and offer your thoughts?
that might be more suited for such a discerning eye ;D
Not much, really. Um... going into my 3rd year of school this fall. Trying to find a job. Went to a few places and I can't even believe how rude some people are, good grief. Whatever happened to common courtesy?