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    Journal: I tried
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    Mood: reflexive
      
    but they still come out the same
    Like going back to a ghost house you used to live in
    The furniture is gone
    but the memories sit with dust and cobwebs
    Do we really change or just go around in cycles
    I'm sure I could still smash a back-talking computer even though I've read a hundred books
    What better way to remind yourself of who you are
    than coming back and putting on an old CD?


    ...Created 2008-08-09 22:57:44     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Hey,just wanted to say thanks for commenting,

    I cant really dumb it down too much,but Im sure you could get something from the poem if you wanted to,I dont want to force meanings or concepts onto the reader,that should be an organic thing

    But thanks again

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2008-08-23 18:14:15 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hidey ho.
    I guess I'll post something when my addled brain is capable of writing something worth reading.
    ;)
    | Posted on 2008-08-19 21:30:34 | by latentlylyrical - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ive been by here daily the last coupla days looking to formulate a thank you for the comment you left on my piece. but it hasnt worked out. i read your comment and had to go back and read the piece you commented on to see if it was mine haha.
    i know the note you spoke of...
    thank you.
    | Posted on 2008-08-14 09:52:07 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Re: Hypnosis

    It was mostly social in my mind really. It was an attempt to change style too I suppose.
    Thanks for the comment, your words are always appreciated.

    Take care
    | Posted on 2008-08-13 20:48:24 | by babyblue002 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thanks for the comment.

    now i could come to your page and lash out with a vengeance not so proper or thank you for the constructive criticism...

    *coughs*
    you and i are but two men of different walks. yes the poem was nostalgic, but thats how it was meant to be written.

    a vanity piece, as was indicated in its description, written to be understood by another member of ES.

    yeah, i got lazy and slacked off, only so that its meaning could be communicated to the other viewers on this site also, so i offer you a challenge old friend...

    could i have you please check out "Girl in the Photo" and offer your thoughts?

    that might be more suited for such a discerning eye ;D

    Tomas
    | Posted on 2008-08-12 13:30:29 | by Loquacious Mind - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Not much, really. Um... going into my 3rd year of school this fall. Trying to find a job. Went to a few places and I can't even believe how rude some people are, good grief. Whatever happened to common courtesy?

    Whatcha been up to?
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 17:13:33 | by Storm of Bliss - [ Reply to This ] -



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