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    Name: Emily Pooler
    ASL: 22/F/US
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    Days Away: 1212
    Life Story: Redemption.
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    Mood: Relaxing
    I'm about to go to Barnes and Noble with my fiance man to do homework and drink coffees. But first, I will eat a taco. Needless to say, I'm happy.

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    Hey Em, just got done with 'All I want is a little foresight.' Ure talent is bubbling at the surface. U are very close to etching ure own style and grasping ure voice as a writer.

    That being said... I want more cohesion in the second stanza. More of a deliberate rhyme scheme. What is it u want to see from this person?

    Visually, that's where I have a crush on u. I can feel ure words w/o seeing them, if that makes even a shred of sense. Idk why but I am not strong w/ visuals. U have a knack. Keep it going.

    Expand on this poem maybe a few more stanzas, or dont. It's all up to u. That's what being great is all about, knowing when to pick ure spots. Take care.
    | Posted on 2010-02-04 11:12:48 | by Jbills - [ Reply to This ] -
    happy new year!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-12-31 10:33:59 | by scissorhands - [ Reply to This ] -
    hey, thanks for the comment, and sorry for the delay on the response. i've been having some computer troubles lately, but i'll comment back as soon as i can.
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 20:32:44 | by Venia - [ Reply to This ] -
    Thank you for adding Calling out your name to your favorites, means alot that you liked it.
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:39:47 | by ira - [ Reply to This ] -
    Thank you for your kind comments on my piece. It was much appreciated and it was humbling that you could relate to it, it was unfortunate for the subject matter but it was still nice.

    Many Thanks,
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 19:35:54 | by Flowerinbloom - [ Reply to This ] -
    thanks for the comment, and your correct that is what the poem is about.
    | Posted on 2007-10-25 23:44:06 | by scardnscared - [ Reply to This ] -

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