--Elite Writer Alias: orange dragon Name: Ekalb Regnimirc ASL: 19/M/LCC Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 610 Life Story: Uneventful [ Ignore User ]
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here's the thing...your poems are too similar to junier high fiction. They're too simple, the phrases feel childish. I'm trying to be honest here. But keep working. They're not bad for starter poems.