hey thanks for the comment on Silhouette of a serenade. I made the spelling corrections...sorry it was late when i typed that and i was doing it fast.
In the way of punctuation, i actually chose not to use it in that poem as much because it is a casual flowing mood and i tend to overpunctuate. i didn't want to take away from that simplistic evening mood and i thought it fit perfectly. also i like the reader to read it the way they want it.