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    Mood: (Part of) A writer's Manifesto
      
          So then, this is the beginning to an interpellation to those of you who, among the various constituencies of this world, are entitled writers. How else should one begin such a beginning but to write about it as if it were not the current hap? Although, it may be more alarming, and of greater importance, to know, instead of distracting ourselves with such whimsical thoughts, that the world is slowly succumbing to a state of stagnant existence. The great idealists feared this would happen if a utopia were to subsist in our near future, however, and without a doubt, we have managed to be besotted by this plight without the delights offered by a utopia. In short, something we have considered a mere fear up until now, has actually crept too close for comfort.

         It is now incumbent upon the implications that are stowed in the title of writer, poet, lyricist - simply put, anybody who creates with words by means of nib - to acknowledge this proposition of sorts. Share with the world thoughts and ideas, profound and superficial alike, by means of anonymous dissertations delivered by hand to the households in the vicinity of ones own domicile. This will be in hopes of promulgating an inauguration of a thought paradigm, which in turn, would allow us to venture on paths unlike the one that has stolen its place underfoot, and is now molesting our youthful minds of their birthright: active thinking.

         Yes, the world is in need of something new, something that might come from you.


    F.R. Scott - Trees in Ice
    these gaunt prongs and points of trees
    pierce the zero air with flame
    every finger of black ice
    stealing the sun's drawn fire
    to make a burning of a barren bush

    underneath
               from
                 still
    flakes       branch
         of           and
           light       arm
    fleck-     fall
        ing       fall
         the
           dark
             white
               snow

    this cruelty is a formal loveliness
    on a tree's torn limbs
    this glittering pain

    The Outlaw AnalysisRobert Service
    A wild and woeful race he ran
    Of lust and sin by land and sea;
    Until, abhorred of God and man,
    They swung him from the gallows-tree.
    And then he climbed the Starry Stair,
    And dumb and naked and alone,
    With head unbowed and brazen glare,
    He stood before the Judgment Throne.

    The Keeper of the Records spoke:
    "This man, O Lord, has mocked Thy Name.
    The weak have wept beneath his yoke,
    The strong have fled before his flame.
    The blood of babes is on his sword;
    His life is evil to the brim:
    Look down, decree his doom, O Lord!
    Lo! there is none will speak for him."

    The golden trumpets blew a blast
    That echoed in the crypts of Hell,
    For there was Judgment to be passed,
    And lips were hushed and silence fell.
    The man was mute; he made no stir,
    Erect before the Judgment Seat . . .
    When all at once a mongrel cur
    Crept out and cowered and licked his feet.

    It licked his feet with whining cry.
    Come Heav'n, come Hell, what did it care?
    It leapt, it tried to catch his eye;
    Its master, yea, its God was there.
    Then, as a thrill of wonder sped
    Through throngs of shining seraphim,
    The Judge of All looked down and said:
    "Lo! here is ONE who pleads for him.

    "And who shall love of these the least,
    And who by word or look or deed
    Shall pity show to bird or beast,
    By Me shall have a friend in need.
    Aye, though his sin be black as night,
    And though he stand 'mid men alone,
    He shall be softened in My sight,
    And find a pleader by My Throne.

    "So let this man to glory win;
    From life to life salvation glean;
    By pain and sacrifice and sin,
    Until he stand before Me -- clean.
    For he who loves the least of these
    (And here I say and here repeat)
    Shall win himself an angel's pleas
    For Mercy at My Judgment Seat."


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    Sorry mate.

    I see absolutely no relationship between the two pieces. What have hips to do with unicorns?

    I'm not usually slow, by the way.

    - A.I.M
    | Posted on 2008-11-30 22:24:45 | by AIM - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    for the piece:"feeling of liking someone very much",
    thank you very much for the comment. it is funny how sometimes what we think or used to feel so strong about can actually make us a victim (in this case our hearts? i suppose?) 2 years is pretty long but yet you used the word "only" to describe the period. im trying hard to fight the feeling off. but right now, probably just fighting the thinking of this person whom i gave my heart too >.< anyway, i did improve it and yes, i did changed google into googol! (i would never know there was a difference if you did not mentioned it! thanks for that as well!) i would not say we are fools just for following our hearts >.< it was just a time period where we put our hearts as priority. you know it is kind of weird but although the feeling is painful - it makes you feel "whole". i do not think that many people can experience this feeling, so i guess from an optimist or maybe naive point of view, we should be kind of "Glad" for the heart's experience?? haha, well. im just saying ( : anyway, thank you very much again for the comment! ( :
    | Posted on 2008-11-30 22:15:14 | by rosesrouges - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Dearest!

    well i have now realized that im somewhat of a cynic. how so you may ask? (ok i know you really havent but to be honest no one is on my yahoo or MSN and i need someone to talk to so im settling for the voices in my head) i was looking up love quotes (God only knows why) and this is what i saw...

    “Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, who calls you back when you hang up on him, who will lie under the stars and listen to your heartbeat, or will stay awake just to watch you sleep... wait for the boy who kisses your forehead, who wants to show you off to the world when you are in sweats, who holds your hand in front of his friends, who thinks you're just as pretty without makeup on. One who is constantly reminding you of how much he cares and how lucky his is to have you.... The one who turns to his friends and says, 'that's her.'”

    this is what i thought.

    "find a guy who is pretty desperate who has no social life and rather be with you when it's night time for there is a slight chance that he will get laid. the kind of guy who will go out with you in public but will walk a few inches away from you and when ever you speak to him you see a slightly puzzled expression as if to an on looker "who's this crazy lady with arm pit sweats talking to" but answers back oh so politely. yadda yadda yadda"

    It is now by this point that i have come to the realization that i have no social life if im delving to deeply into corny online quotes.

    Thus bringing me to another point that has probably been pointed out but im still going to bring it up (yes yes i am THAT bored)

    the people who are completely shallow and totally vain in aspects of who they date and who they hang out with (first hand experience with a cousin who surprisingly her 4'11 self can hold so much vanity im surprise she can walk with her head held up instead of dragging behind her) come online and suddenly transformed to this deep person and thus every other person is a tortured soul but goes on like this:

    Dick: how was your day?
    Jane: [censored]ty but i dont want to talk about it so lets just drop it.

    (i actually had this convo today to be clear im Dick xD hahahahahahhahahahahahahha this is a cry for help i can tell)

    So basically this idiot (good friend of mine but god its like bamboo splinters shoved under finger nails at times) brings up the fact that something is wronged but suddenly doesnt want to talk about it which IF that was slightly true the said well lets just call the person Idjit, wouldn't have mentioned it in the first place


    so as i deliberate in my self deprivation if i should hit the Post button or should i just erase my whole pointless rant find some sleeping pills and find my way to that big ol' bed of mine or if i hit post risking you finding out how crazy i truly am and how off subject i tend to be...meh might as well not waste a good decent totally unrelated rant to the way i truly feel (i think im every therapists wet dream, that besides celebrity children who blame their failures as a decent human being to drugs and their families famousnessesesss yes that is a word...i presume way to much i know but im awesome)


    all the love
    kisses and hugs
    and ummm something with a teddy bear

    Nikki ^_^

    HAPPY THANKSGIVING!
    | Posted on 2008-11-27 07:08:53 | by nikita2u - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well dear friend, every often or so, i disappear, usually against my will. so when i come back, i email all my poems (including the comments i received) to my yahoo. this forces me to think up new stuff instead of letting all my old stuff rot on my page without any comments or views...i ish a sad person i know. or i get this big ass bought of depression that even my old therapist couldn't help me out (she suggested holding an ice cube...seriously) so i wipe everything off all my profiles and start from scratch. im an odd yet amazing individual ^_^ and that is a long drawn out blown up nonscensical reason for my oddities ^_^ awesome aren't i xD

    Nikki
    | Posted on 2008-11-27 03:18:16 | by nikita2u - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey honey!!!

    how are ya? ^_^
    | Posted on 2008-11-26 16:14:44 | by nikita2u - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    glad to help.
    | Posted on 2008-11-26 07:28:05 | by trouble - [ Reply to This ] -



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