--Elite Writer Alias: pahyn Name: Michael LaMontain ASL: 34/male/Albany, NY Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 78 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 421 D 1.15 Years 0.12 Decades 14.03 Months 60.14 Weeks 4.21000e+7 Heart Beats -There you go eggman [ Communicate asdf ] View all Faves [ + RSS ] [ + Google It ] [ + My Yahoo ]

Journal: comment boxes -------------------------------------------Mood: confused    Ok people, I am not certain what I am doing wrong but my most reccent submissions do not have comment boxes attached to them. Please feel free to leave general comments on my main page though until I can remedy the situation. thank you M. LaMontain ...Created 2007-11-16 12:45:23     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

Last 20 Submissions  The Empty Lot :|| V: 89 | C: 0 ||: ::Nostalgia : Class : Misc :  CKM :|| V: 71 | C: 0 ||: ::Love : Class : Prose :  Plastic Epiphany :|| V: 76 | C: 0 ||: ::Misc : Class : Misc :  From a Top to a bottom :|| V: 87 | C: 0 ||: ::Passion : Class : Poetry :  Degrees of a Dying Dream :|| V: 151 | C: 1 ||: ::Serious : Class : Poetry :  Forever :|| V: 98 | C: 1 ||: ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :

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there's no comment box! empty field is a very good write. you do a great job making the reader feel your loss. the last stanza is very powerful. my only crit is there are some areas where you try to get too cute with some of the rhymes and i think it hurts this. other than that this is wonderful work

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