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    Journal: comment boxes
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    Mood: confused
      
    Ok people, I am not certain what I am doing wrong but my most reccent submissions do not have comment boxes attached to them. Please feel free to leave general comments on my main page though until I can remedy the situation.

    thank you

    M. LaMontain


    ...Created 2007-11-16 12:45:23     [ View Past Journals ]

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     The Empty Lot
    :|| V: 89 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Nostalgia : Class : Misc :
     CKM
    :|| V: 71 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Prose :
     Plastic Epiphany
    :|| V: 76 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     From a Top to a bottom
    :|| V: 87 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Degrees of a Dying Dream
    :|| V: 151 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Forever
    :|| V: 98 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
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    there's no comment box! empty field is a very good write. you do a great job making the reader feel your loss. the last stanza is very powerful. my only crit is there are some areas where you try to get too cute with some of the rhymes and i think it hurts this. other than that this is wonderful work
    | Posted on 2007-11-06 11:21:09 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -



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