--Elite Writer Alias: Passionbyapathy Name: Lovable Stranger ASL: 17/M/Groveport OH Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 0 Life Story: Long [ Ignore User ]
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Ooops. Sorry I only read your first comment. My bad. Like I said, tired.
And, I guess there's nothing wrong with striving to make yourself a better person. That's an honourable goal, but, remember, you're pretty great as is.
More than one broken heart? You need some serious scotch tape, mister. x.x
Aw don't worry about. Busyness plagues us all--some more than others.
You don't have a superiority complex.
Some people are overly sensitive about their work.
Syn sounds pretty confident about herself and calls herself an adult, but...her poetry seems a little cliché'd and quite frankly, I've seen seventeen year olds write better. myself not included, hah.
And don't let her bring your work down, darling. You have depth.
she needs to get off her high horse and grow up. This site is about getting critique on work, positive and negative. if a person can't take the comments, then they shouldn't be on here.
yeah...
your comment... on my page...
i was unaware that you were some miraculous self-proclaimed child prodigy, because child, you're seventeen...
i've been writing since i was thirteen, and i am twenty-three, so you can just take your 'advice' right back home to mommy...
i can't believe you have the audacity to label my [censored] as cliché when all your poems (yes, i read them) sound like bad Donovan songs/standard teenage fare...
so don't come at me with this 'you have potential' bull[censored], because trust me, no one on this site writes like me, and i know that. tons of people write like you on this site, and i know that, too, because i see it ALL THE TIME. now, i'm no literary great, but i can tell when someone has a superiority complex about their writing. ...sometimes confidence outweighs education.
~Syn
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