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    Mood: The Usual
      
    We share a secret. Maybe I'm in love with you. But that doesn't change anything. Maybe it just makes life easier, now that i know. Maybe I can begin to understand and walk away from this. Maybe it just makes life more difficult and the sight of you will kill me, mind body and soul. Maybe I'm reading more then i should be into this. No. somethings wrong here. I can pretend its not true, from this day forward you will be known as my imagination. A dream that i have in my waking hours. Never to touch my sleeping ones. Never to touch my soul and my inner most thoughts. You will be the one I was waiting for, the one that I couldn't bring myself to know.


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    hi! are you ok? hahahahaha... i kids.
    hey thanks for the lovely comment.

    and i guess i thought i would be dissapointed because of the description. i mean i expected it to be the usual cheese but somehow i sensed that it was heartfelt and so how can that not be beautiful.

    have a nutritious day!
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 15:34:59 | by ma - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    That thing you read, its supposed to be written that way, kind of childishly. The comment before you said the same thing, I wrote it like something youd write in high school so as to make the stand out parts un-deniably stand out. But its not really a poem per say.

    Anyway you got the best advice I can give you, those poems I read are un-salvagable and Im not going to lie about it. Theyre angst poetry, this is a type of writing you see teenagers come up with and it will always be criticised. I realise you probably want to vent your feelings but its impossible to see them as anything more than that.

    If you want a tip: read some books of poetry, try Sylvia Plath, she writes confessional poems but shes still artistic about the whole thing.

    If you wanted something less child-like in tone by me you should have tried "Loveless" though I dont have any staight up poetry up at the moment (I took down like 89 poems a weekm ago). When I do write some new ones your welcome to come across and knock them.

    But I do hope you improve, you were very gracious in the face of criticism.

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2009-05-09 07:22:36 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on the poem, I am so glad someone actually takes the time to read this thing Im writting. I've still got lots and lots to go on this thing, its far from being finished right now, but however I am updating you on my edit to this thing. But I promise itll be done soon. Lol I don't know when yet, but Ill update you each time I add more. I apprechiate you reading it again. A lot of losers "this is to long" whatever poetry can never be "to long", just like people can never be "to lazy".
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 01:02:49 | by Crestfallenman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much on your dear comment on If Hope Can Be Touched. I apprechiated reading a comment like yours. It makes me feel that I do have talent. And your very welcome on your poem Lies. I know its hard to find those who actually give a [censored], but their out there if you look hard enough.
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 16:42:06 | by Crestfallenman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    There might be a reason you dont see me on MSN....when its daytime for you its probably very early for me in the morning. But I will try n stay up late one of these nights and we can always chat on e-mail as well. lol my town is pretty damn small its got a few resturaunts (mostly fast food like mcdonalds) Other than that its a pretty boring town no movie theatres here either.
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 20:33:38 | by MaxHam - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Gurl
    Im Glad You Liked My Latest Poem Punishment = Death
    I Didnt Really Intend FOr That To be A Poem but I Was In Such A Bad Mood I was Ranting And Thatz What i Got
    Guyz Really Are Wankers And After You Put up With Alot Of Shit You Kinda Expect All Guyz To Treat You The Same Its Quite Unfair..
    Ohwell Im In A Great Relationship Now And Im happi Lol You may Know Him brokenbylove Lol Ive Got Him Stalked Newaiiz
    Thanx Again For Reading
    xXx *Mwah* Luv Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-03-06 04:13:42 | by AngelinDisguise - [ Reply to This ] -



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