Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Pietro
    Name: Pietro
    ASL: 30/m/cebu
    Website:[ Education ]
    Days Away: 301
    Life Story: working on it..
    [ Ignore User ]

    Favorites: 46
    Forum Posts: 1
    Shoutbox Posts: 0
    RP Posts: 0
    Signup Date: 4336 D
    11.88 Years 1.19 Decades
    144.53 Months 619.43 Weeks
    4.336000e+8 Heart Beats
    -There you go eggman
    Quote:
    tempus fugitive

    nav
    nav

    AIM: for the bushes
    Yahoo: fardo_baggins
    [ Communicate asdf ]

    Recent Favorites:
    union meeting by rws
    UTE TRIP TO APPALACHIA by hanuman
    Lanterns of the Wisps by HisNameIsNoMore
    I am not. by nwproud
    It's Late by BlankSheet
    View all Faves

    Featured:
    october


    Awards:
      Elite Contributer: For users that are extremely giving in feedback. Contributer: For users that are especially giving in feedback.

    [ + RSS ]
    [ + Google It ]
    [ + My Yahoo ]



    Journal: 10 years
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: Too much at once...
      
    10 years on this website.

    That's something ain't it? I owe a lot to this place. The ability of expression, concept, execution and interaction served me well. This place is in me. A part of me.


    As fellow user put it "it may be the same location, but it isn't the same place".

    His username is rws btw. Hope he's doing fine. Huge influence on me.


    I am writing this on a device I could never have dreamed of when I posted my first critiques here. My 1 year old son is sleeping beside me. I truly have seen some shit in that time and it was beautiful in an apocalyptic way..


    Yes Bill, you're right. It's not the same place anymore, and we're not the same person and it's not the same world. And that's ok. That's fine. It's totally fine to orbit the same sun. We're expanding further away from the center anyways. A wild ride on this rock it is and whatever comes, I'll welcome it with open arms and greet the asteroid like an old friend.


    ...Created 2016-09-12 13:51:09     [ View Past Journals ]

    [ View as Blog ]

    dotsLast 20 Submissionsdots

    Featured: october

     Drive
    :|| V: 299 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     To My Fellow Children
    :|| V: 747 | C: 6 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     The Brave Little Sperm Cell That Could
    :|| V: 741 | C: 11 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     The Brave Little Sperm Cell That Could
    :|| V: 615 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Story :
     The Brave Little Sperm Cell That Co
    :|| V: 742 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Deep Thought :
     Featured workoctober
    :|| V: 967 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     1-900-CONDOMS
    :|| V: 1072 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Spoof :
     Air Sickness #3
    :|| V: 1069 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Air Sickness #2
    :|| V: 829 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Air Sickness
    :|| V: 813 | C: 7 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Comment you lazy motherfuckers!
    :|| V: 1239 | C: 8 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Misc :
     FOR SALE
    :|| V: 1177 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Poetry :
     70 Word Short Story "The Dockhand"
    :|| V: 2374 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Story :
     Artemis
    :|| V: 881 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Nature : Class : Poetry :
     186, 285 mps
    :|| V: 889 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Yhriter's Bloque
    :|| V: 961 | C: 5 ||:
    ::Mirror or Mask : Class : Poetry :
     70 Word Short Story "Third Period"
    :|| V: 865 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Nature : Class : Story :
     70 Word Short Story *void of title
    :|| V: 765 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Story :
     70 Word Short Story "Quite Quietly"
    :|| V: 943 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Nature : Class : Story :
     70 Word Short Story "Detuning"
    :|| V: 987 | C: 6 ||:
    ::Nostalgia : Class : Story :
    List All...





    ||| Messages |||
      
    Hey! Thanks for commenting on my work. I am glad you enjoyed the tune, haha.

    To be honest, I've been trying to practice getting back into the writing game. That song struck me as monotonous and repetitive, so nothing new was coming to me, and I couldn't help but want to end that poem as much as I wanted to end that song? Nothing wrong with the tune, I just couldn't resonate with it for more than a couple of minutes, ya know? I dunno. Perhaps my attention span is shot to pieces. Ah well.

    Hope all is well with you, and once again, many thanks!!!

    -Esha
    | Posted on 2016-09-27 07:30:46 | by EshyFishy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Just tried with Firefox. No luck.
    | Posted on 2016-09-24 22:21:11 | by Ontlogicalamity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey there!

    i literally just listed your page yesterday and read your status. It does feel like 2007 again. I guess we are the progenitors of that and I guess we need to keep the fires burning.


    I look forward to reading your work again. Give me a couple days and maybe we can start this group back up.

    JP
    | Posted on 2016-09-21 10:40:17 | by rev.jpfadeproof - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your thoughts on Technical Writing. In response to your question, no, I didn't mean it rhetorically. The point I was alluding to is that a technical piece invariably has something that much (though not by any means all) poetry lacks: Purpose. And not just any purpose, but typically a purpose much grander than the scope of the piece itself. Whether in support of landing a man on the moon, or probing the depths of the ocean, or the human genome, or just administering an organization of 10,000 people. No single person can accomplish these things alone. Technical writing is the glue that allows such grand projects to cohere. It connects the Why to the What to the many layers of How.
    | Posted on 2016-09-19 21:10:41 | by Ontlogicalamity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It has been a while.
    | Posted on 2016-09-18 21:07:09 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the read, and comment. I appreciate it. Glad it made you think. Best of luck.
    | Posted on 2016-09-18 14:02:51 | by closetpoet - [ Reply to This ] -



    Format Text?


    Forum id=#27914

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry