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    Mood: Straightening things out...
      
    Happy Easter in the way you believe. This is the only forum in which I find it pure to express for the sake of the writing and the pathetic, human condition. Things are contrite this time of my life, but I will because I'm just in eye this. I've poured into my music writing and arrangement so it's now really up to me to make this my account of how I see it. How glad I am that elite skills is still a place of refuge from the over-exposure of Facebook. Perhaps, here other writers can share their pains and joys through this art of the word....


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    Merry Christmas to you too!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-12-24 23:21:08 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks. and a happy thanksgiving to you as well.
    | Posted on 2012-11-21 19:52:33 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment. That was done as kind of a word association thing.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-10-15 18:23:15 | by Blue Monk - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i don't agree with comments you got that what you write isn't poetry.

    it is free verse..but from the "everyone went back from their places" line on...some of the lines need to be tightened up, shortened; they are a bit trippy...especially the "regarding everything that what which..."

    that is hard to read...

    just some tightening of the lines in general would smooth out the read.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-01 08:20:12 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for your comment months and months ago, and nice elliot smith quote.
    | Posted on 2012-09-11 21:08:48 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for commenting on "Silken Highway" :)

    Althea~
    | Posted on 2011-08-06 15:44:24 | by AltheaLaochra - [ Reply to This ] -



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